Please can you continue this story. you have masterfully developed the Daria cast into deep and intreiging characters. You have taken Jesse a seemingly simple flat character and made him into a very intelligent and deep person. Your stories are funny deep and more entertaining then half of the shows the characters come from.

...exellent.

Totally awesome. I love it.

Are you continuing with this, or have you abandoned it?

You might want to work on turning your plot synopsis into an actual story.

I highly recommend you read Lindsey Davis & Terry Pratchett, who are both very skilled wordsmiths.

I highly recommend you read the following fanfiction writers, for similar reasons: Voice of My(everything that she wrote), Ruthless Bunny(Bed & Breakfast Man), InstantDelusion(everything you can find of his), Deref and Thea Zara (All My Children)

I like the concept. I rather suspect that the people giving you brilliant reviews do too. I think you would benefit from going back over your chapters and fleshing out the dialogue, the action, etc.

If you are finding difficulty writing the meat of the story, perhaps you might like to track down someone who writes well, who would be enthusiastic to collaborate with you to turn this into a fantastic fan fiction.

X-men is well written for a saturday morning cartoon, it's not just a good vs evil thing, it has a lot more diversity, and this future scenario where genocidal fikken ghirns are in charge trying to kill any non-average person, as with the grandfather paradox scenario, is in keeping with that.

Please continue, I will enjoy seeing what happens with Jasmines Chronowerx idea, hopefully they won't encounter any time cops such as those in the Star Trek universe.

OH, in this future, have they banned inciting sympathy for mutants and political opposition of any kind and are trying to take over the world?

please write more chapters! this is my favorite story and I cant wait to find out what happens next

Huzzah! New chapter of one of my fave merger/crosses.

He literally keeps the flame from hurting them, mental control does that. Even better, after this, her subconscious will likely beging to teach her how she can consume flame, absorbing it as easily as she produces it. This last effectively making Jane flameproof once she masters it.
Eventually. They learn at their own pace, after all. one trick Susuan Richards still doesn't do, that I've noted is surrounding something in a field and using that 'touch' to render it invisible. As for seeing the invisible, Daria likely hasn't been presented with anything invisible as of yet.
Anotehr point of interest is the hyper-genius that Reed got. Given Trent is anything but a scientist, will added creativity and musical genius take its place?
Finally, are other Marvel types going to get into this? You mentioned FOH. I'm juyst curious.
Good Read, Keep it up!

Sorry for the delay! GREAT chapter as usual! I liked Daria and Quinn's argument over the drugs and the whole thing had very clever and witty dialogue (Trent to police-'Since when do we EVER need backup?'). Only thing is, I'd have liked to have seen what Helen and Jake's reactions were to Quinn when she got home and had to fess up. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter when you get the chance!

Aww man!Still no update?I luv this story,but you gotta update!Please??

Really enjoying this. All good stuff.

Sailor moon parody! W00t!

This is amazing so far! My favorite story was with the demented bears. I love that the stories connect together and make sense, instead of being choppy. I did notice, however, that you don't say a lot about Daria's parents. It seems like they'd meddle a bit more. Just a thought.
Anyways, excellent job! I can't wait for the next chapter.

FYI- the longest time a total solar eclipse can last is 7 minutes 29 seconds not several hours- but since in your AU mermaids can happen and toxic waste can turn teens into superheroes,etc., I guess it's not too OOC.