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| Person 2006-03-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseVery interesting and creative, but needs to be spell checked. |
| Kaibutsu 2005-12-25 ch 9,  | abuseplease update soon !! puppy eyes !! |
| Essence-chan 2005-11-20 ch 4, | abusethis story is good. keep updating. |
| AliceMeidou 2005-09-20 ch 9, anon. | abuseHello Is there somebody here? Oh, well never mind Please Music-box write soon. |
| AliceMeidou 2005-08-22 ch 9, anon. | abuseI love your story!! It is great , few people write about kaldea and she is my favorite character (Dauragon too) I hate dominique >:[ You are a very good writer. Thank you for continue. Please update soon!! |
| Ryan Angel Linteah 2005-02-22 ch 8, | abuseHello, I love you story and this chapter was great. I haven't reviewed all your other chapters because, um, uh, don't know why, I added you to my msn list so you don't have to worry bout that. Keep up the good work, I love Dominiqe but I'm really not mad at you, I also like, umm, maybe more thank like but I like Sion Barzahd also, but who cares, you make a great story and that's all I need. Continue. |
| Unknown Heart 2005-01-18 ch 8, anon. | abuseI thought the story was VERY good. I loved it a lot.I am a HUGE Kaldea fan.She is my favorite character out of all of the Boncer fighters.Please continue writting this story , I am hooked. |
| Ashley Ashums 2005-01-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseHowdy! It's so sad how she couldn't get to Dominique before the MSF, AND she's all in her oily panther form and stuck. I mean, wow, life is suckin' for her right now! Keep writing! *hug* -Ashums |
| Greenaleydis 2005-01-12 ch 8, | abuseMarvelous job on this chapter! I love the way everything was played out, every detail of what happend and how Kaldea felt. Loved it. Kaldea is my favorite character. The panther change was awsome too. A great way to combine her feelings with her other form. I compliment you on this! Keep writing! -Amu- |
| Amber 2004-11-15 ch 7, anon. | abuseDude! This story is awsome! ... sorry. Anyway, i like your story! I can't wait for the panther and the kidnapping scene! Nice job on the fic. |
| Whisper Darkharst 2004-11-09 ch 7, | abuseAh~! *Squeals* I always liked Kaldea and never read many stories of her but this.. *gets all teary-eyed and hugs the author* You must write more~!! pleeasse!! >_< Can't wait to know what happens. Write more! (Or I'll hunt you down and threaten you :O) ^^ \/,, There were a few typo's but nothing too hard to read. I like the way you descripted everything in detail and also captured Kaldea's feelings so well though her being perky scared me a bit. But I'm seeing she's mellowing out to her cold, lovable self. Keep up the good work! |
| OniRazz 2004-11-08 ch 7, | abuseWell it's about time Sion and co. showed up. Great chapter nonetheless! (b^_^)b |
| UNKNOWN 2004-10-19 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is great! Please hurry up and review, as soon as you can. |
| Da 1 an only David 2004-10-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseoh my good lord! this was an awsome fanfic! pleaz keep em' coming! |
| Ashley Moose 2004-09-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseYou can't do this to me! *sobs* Post the chapter, I beg of thee! |