 Nancy 2004-01-01 . chapter 11 Hi, thanks for updating for us. This is such a great story - love the fact that MP is FORCED to become aware of her real/true emotions. What a risk they take when they rescue Jarod - and he is safe - well, sort of, for a while. So glad that he called MP - and that the two of them are sure of each other. Will Mr. Parker be able to find out, even though the cameras were disabled, that MP and the others are the ones who rescued Jarod? Well, until next chapter... Keep writing the good stuff for us. Thanks |
 gemini006007 2003-12-28 . chapter 11 Hi Alia G.
Your story had a great ending. Even though they could not be together rker finally made the ultimate sacrifice to keep Jarod safe and prove to him that she really loved him. Hope you write a sequel |
 Pretender Fanatic 2003-12-27 . chapter 11 That was cool I guess. It was like a big circle and nothing changed but yet everything changed. I like the way that you had Miss Parker stay at The Center and not run off with Jarod for once. It was a great story. I hope to see another story from you soon.
Pretender Fanatic |
 DreaminofLorien 2003-12-27 . chapter 11:-o! Wow, wonderful chapter, and i assume this is *gulp* the end? You should make a sequal! Please.. think about it.. I love this story, you are on my author alert list, and i hope you will kep writing.
Always Me |
 Anastasia Who 2003-12-26 . chapter 11*sniff* I can't believe this story is over. Poor Miss Parker and Jarod. I thought you had a great ending. That was so perfect. Really great story. I think you should make a sequel. Great job Alia G. L |
 DreaminofLorien 2003-12-17 . chapter 10Figures, i go to FOTR *cry* T *cry more* ROTK *uncontrolable sobs* come home read a fanfic *cry like last night*, life goes on, but this is a great story! I really hope there is one more chapter, so i can cry more, but really, i think you are an awesome writer, and i cant resist love stories. |
 gemini006007 2003-12-15 . chapter 10 Hi Alia,
That's just not fair. After all Miss Parker went through to save him, now they have to be apart again. I hope they can find a way to be together soon. Please update soon. Great story.
Mercy |
 Anastasia Who 2003-12-15 . chapter 10Aww... Poor Miss Parker. She cares so much for Jarod that she would rather go back to the center than endanger his life. This is sweet. Great chapter. I love the end of this chapter. Update soon. |
 gemini006007 2003-12-13 . chapter 9 Hi Alia,
That was Great, they got Jarod out and he is awake, but what will happen next?, What will Miss Parker do now to help Jarod? Please update soon. Keep up the good Job!
Mercy. |
 punkrockllama578 2003-12-11 . chapter 9hm... very interesting, please continue |
 DreaminofLorien 2003-12-11 . chapter 9*gasps* I was so worried somthing would go wrong, but I was wrong, for now at least.. What is going to happen? Please post the next chapter soon! |
 Anastasia Who 2003-12-11 . chapter 9Great Chapter. Miss Parker finally said she loved him. So sweet. I am glad the plan worked to get Jarod out and I am glad he is finally awake. Update soon. |
 robbie 2003-12-11 . chapter 9 Interesting story. I can't wait to read what happens next. keep up the good work. |
 gemini006007 2003-12-05 . chapter 8 Hi Alia,
Great chapter. Glad that Parker finally acknowledge her feelings for Jarod. Hope that their plan will work. Please update soon. Keep up the good work!
Mercy |
 DreaminofLorien 2003-12-05 . chapter 8Yay! Go Ms.Parker,I am so glad she is going to try and save him, I can't wait to see what happens next! *smiles* such a great story..
~*DreaminofLorien*~
Dream of a place where elves live together, and sing of the sacrifices made for freedom and love. |