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Nancy
2004-01-01 . chapter 11
Hi, thanks for updating for us. This is such a great story - love the fact that MP is FORCED to become aware of her real/true emotions. What a risk they take when they rescue Jarod - and he is safe - well, sort of, for a while. So glad that he called MP - and that the two of them are sure of each other. Will Mr. Parker be able to find out, even though the cameras were disabled, that MP and the others are the ones who rescued Jarod? Well, until next chapter... Keep writing the good stuff for us. Thanks
gemini006007
2003-12-28 . chapter 11
Hi Alia G.
Your story had a great ending. Even though they could not be together rker finally made the ultimate sacrifice to keep Jarod safe and prove to him that she really loved him. Hope you write a sequel
Pretender Fanatic
2003-12-27 . chapter 11
That was cool I guess. It was like a big circle and nothing changed but yet everything changed. I like the way that you had Miss Parker stay at The Center and not run off with Jarod for once. It was a great story. I hope to see another story from you soon.
Pretender Fanatic
DreaminofLorien
2003-12-27 . chapter 11
:-o! Wow, wonderful chapter, and i assume this is *gulp* the end? You should make a sequal! Please.. think about it.. I love this story, you are on my author alert list, and i hope you will kep writing.
Always Me
Anastasia Who
2003-12-26 . chapter 11
*sniff* I can't believe this story is over. Poor Miss Parker and Jarod. I thought you had a great ending. That was so perfect. Really great story. I think you should make a sequel. Great job Alia G. L
DreaminofLorien
2003-12-17 . chapter 10
Figures, i go to FOTR *cry* T *cry more* ROTK *uncontrolable sobs* come home read a fanfic *cry like last night*, life goes on, but this is a great story! I really hope there is one more chapter, so i can cry more, but really, i think you are an awesome writer, and i cant resist love stories.
gemini006007
2003-12-15 . chapter 10
Hi Alia,
That's just not fair. After all Miss Parker went through to save him, now they have to be apart again. I hope they can find a way to be together soon. Please update soon. Great story.
Mercy
Anastasia Who
2003-12-15 . chapter 10
Aww... Poor Miss Parker. She cares so much for Jarod that she would rather go back to the center than endanger his life. This is sweet. Great chapter. I love the end of this chapter. Update soon.
gemini006007
2003-12-13 . chapter 9
Hi Alia,
That was Great, they got Jarod out and he is awake, but what will happen next?, What will Miss Parker do now to help Jarod? Please update soon. Keep up the good Job!
Mercy.
punkrockllama578
2003-12-11 . chapter 9
hm... very interesting, please continue
DreaminofLorien
2003-12-11 . chapter 9
*gasps* I was so worried somthing would go wrong, but I was wrong, for now at least.. What is going to happen? Please post the next chapter soon!
Anastasia Who
2003-12-11 . chapter 9
Great Chapter. Miss Parker finally said she loved him. So sweet. I am glad the plan worked to get Jarod out and I am glad he is finally awake. Update soon.
robbie
2003-12-11 . chapter 9
Interesting story. I can't wait to read what happens next. keep up the good work.
gemini006007
2003-12-05 . chapter 8
Hi Alia,
Great chapter. Glad that Parker finally acknowledge her feelings for Jarod. Hope that their plan will work. Please update soon. Keep up the good work!
Mercy
DreaminofLorien
2003-12-05 . chapter 8
Yay! Go Ms.Parker,I am so glad she is going to try and save him, I can't wait to see what happens next! *smiles* such a great story..
~*DreaminofLorien*~
Dream of a place where elves live together, and sing of the sacrifices made for freedom and love.
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