Not too bad, just a little short.

ok so i'm the 1st person to review this in over a year! yaye! so anyway, i wish it was longer and it took awhile to figure out and it was a little strange

que? (translation from Spanish to English: what?)

Oh *HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA* That...was *HAHAHAHAHA*funny! LOL!

write more i tell you more!
-Dagger

hey Yume~i really liked this story, although it was kinda strange. it took me a while to figure it out, but i got it. I wish it was longer, so update soon! byebye~

Fluffy and inu-chan where not being funny i was freaked

um, i dont get it. But thats just becuz i dont know anything about Inu Yasha.

keep going! I like where its going!

Lol this is pretty good so far please update soon

Tee hee! that was funneis. me likes. rite mors soons!

MoonFire:
Man thier jerks.
Alabaster Duches:
Question is tha the end of the fanfic?
Lady Ivory:
If it is the end that was like the shortest Inu ff I've ever raed.
Star Struck:
Snore that was so boring if all the ffs you write are this boring you should stop writeing.

Good, but a couple of grammatical errors. Oh, and isn't Hallow's Eve on October 31st? Anyways, read and review my stuff if you get the chance.

Wo, scary, and funny... good job, but it seems like there should be more, like a SangoxMiroku hentai scene, or even better a SangoxInu-Yasha hentai scene. ^_^
Heh heh, *Goes off to write while whistling* ;)

I like it, but it could use a few small editing tasks. It's got good potential. ^_^