 unknown 2005-08-12 . chapter 1 O.O i wonder what happen? update =) |
 Midas 2004-01-01 . chapter 3It's kinda mixed with FF 9 right? It's good so keep it up! |
 Kimaka 2003-11-26 . chapter 3I love this story! Update soon! ^_^ |
 Souljahette 2003-11-06 . chapter 3nice! cant wait for next chappie! |
 ReaverDeamon 2003-10-25 . chapter 3Like the chapter, keep it up. |
 soda-cola-pop 2003-10-25 . chapter 3aw...
best friends loving the same man... ^_^ i liked how you portrayed aeris's character. ((good thing you didn't bash her or something))
poor tifa... how long will cloud make her suffer? :(
sorry i sound braind dead... i only had about 5 hours of sleep.. :)
i'll write a decent revuew asap. |
 The_author 2003-10-23 . chapter 2 Hey soda thanks for the suggestion ^_^ Sorry if I won't be able to update for the next few...i don't know how long. Org meetings and duties are heavilly weighing me down. Thanks for anyone who'll read. Remember, Final Fantasy 7 rocks! |
 SteveMcNormalguy 2003-10-21 . chapter 2good cha[ter, keep the writing going. |
 soda-cola-pop 2003-10-21 . chapter 2i honestly, honestly, HONESTLY wrote a review for this chapter BUT i pressed alt d, i think, and then something about a word search/dictionary or something popped out. ^_^ but i'm in a good mood so i won't let that bother me.
^_^ haha, Boys Be is my favorite anime! ^_^ i hate it's shortness though, but then again, some animes lose their "soul" because they're too long, hence, the story gets dragging. ^_^ harhar, and as for ranma 1/2 ^_^ haha, i'm addicted to it! love the ranma/akane pairing, hahaha! ^_^
ok, back to the review...
*sniffs* this chapter is sad... :( i'm assuming tifa's looking back on the "happy times" she had with mr. strife (haha, his name suits him! ^_^ donchathink?) oh yeah... ^_^ harhar, you sorta changed cloud's promise! ^_^ instead of the one by the well (i honestly don't know it by heart, well, not anymore... *sighs*) you made it into a "i will never leave you" promise! :( sadly, he is already leaving her, though, not in the literal sense...
btw... you know, i think a lot of other people want to review this, but the thing is, your author profile doesn't allow anonymous reviews in your stories... ^_^ maybe you could, disable it? ^_^
haha, that was a long rant! ^_^
please do inform me when you post the 3rd one! ^_^
and THANK YOU VERY MUCH for reviewing my story. ^_^ *hugs Limited-Acces*
tc
rach c", |
 Superficial-Honesty 2003-10-21 . chapter 1Hey there it's me ^__^ Arigatou for reviewing my story you don't know how helpful your opinions are to me.
Hey soda-cola-pop thanks for the constructive criticism. And about the boys be thing it was purely coincidental. it has been years when I first thought of this story, way before I watched boys be. I do know that episode you're referring to (boys be- neat anime I used to watch it)
And now about that uncute expression; I really like Ranma 1/2 and I thought it would be really cute ^__~
I hope you guys will keep on reading! By then see you 15!
B-D |
 BlueBubbles 2003-10-20 . chapter 1I have to admit, this was a pretty darned good stroy! Very original, very AU, and very nice! The clotiness certainly helps things, too! So.. you better continue this, K? Keep on writing! |
 soda-cola-pop 2003-10-20 . chapter 1^_^ i read this last night, i think, and i wasn't able to review because the internet time out on me. gawd, i hate it when that happens! anyway... nice plot! ^_^ it actually reminded me of an episode in "boys be," the part where aki met her ex boyfriend (a photographer)... haha, the "uncute" comment said by cloud reminded me of ranma 1/2! ^_^ full of anime, harhar!
hmm... constructive criticism, eh? here's one: you could try and write the transition between the flashback and real time instead of just putting the "~ Flashback:" erm, did that make sense? ^_^ sowee, i just had to say it... (i'm not saying my writing is flawless or something,^_^ that's just a suggestion, ok?) hope it can help, though.
hey, i'm looking forward to your next update... ^_^ please, please, please mail me when you get the next chapter up? i want to read on how a dying (or is it dead already?) flame gets rekindled... ^_^
tc
rach
soda_cola_pop@yahoo.com
sodacolapop@yahoo.com |
 happyangel 2003-10-19 . chapter 1Love the story so far, please continue to write. |
 SteveMcNormalguy 2003-10-19 . chapter 1Wow, there seems to be a hint of angst in the mix, I like it. Please continue writing. |
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