Okay good... for a second there I thought Clef was just loosing his furry little mind. It's a little confusing in spots. Sometimes I can't really tell who you're talking about. Yes, it is a little confusing to me but I expect that. Hope to hear from you soon.

one of the better re-makes of this one i've seen. keep going!

OO...! . Update soon, please! Very interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter! I like your story very, VERY much! Keep up the excellent work!

o.O;; Oishh...What the hell happened there, why DID Clef kiss Presea...but...
YAY YOU UPDATED! . Now...for the next chapter...hehehe...
( *yells* SCREW ASCOT! *coughs* I didn't mean that...really...;; )

hihi! thanx for the comment. ) really appreciate it! _ urs are great too. but for this chappie...T_T why did clef...? waa! X.x and ascot... haha. but besides that, nice chappie. - mm...i tink the lyrics does fit. ) not totally but most of it. . u tried out for cheerleading? O.o;; hm...which sch r u frm? _"" nvm. oh...nvm...i noe tt if u tell me it'll spoil the plot. .;; _ i'll juz hv to wait! hm...sth like my fic? the plot of fb? o.o;; *holds breath* lemme think...*breaths out* i'm confused. *blinks* um...nvm. ;; i'm always like tt. woohoo! u like yuki! _ at first i found him okay, but i've grown to like him now. ) cool! and all the fb quizzies tt i've done so far, my result is always him. whee! happy v day to u too! - mine was great as well! oh...beta-reader or editor...um...i can try and help but i tink tt i wun be a very gd one. ;; *waves hand up and down - tink shigure * anywayz, pls update soon! _ and take care! i noe sch is hard. X.X;; cya! *waves* .

How cute! Makes wanna -ooh- shake. _ Update soon kays?

Hello! _ I'm glad you finally updated! (Not that I should talk... *cough* I'm a terrible updater. -_-;;) Anyways, great chappie! Update soon!
Oh yeah, by the way... I just noticed that you liked Fruits Basket! I love Furuba as well! Yuki is kawaii, ne? _ Ja!

c.e: hihi! pls dun say tt u've forgotten me.
umi: she has.
c.e: -.-** *grabs clef's staff and hits umi on the head*
umi: OUCH!
c.e: *returns clef's staff*
clef: -.-;;
c.e: nvm, anywayz. ur fic's nice! i'm enjoying it so far. yah! umi/clef! tho abt the par where umi ends up with ascot... does clef die? O.O
umi and clef: O.O
c.e: if not, then i want him!
umi: -.-*
clef: *sigh*
c.e: haha, jking. good work! keep it up! _ and if u still dunno who i am...wells. i AM frm s'pore (lol), sounds like u are too. . and thanx for reviewing my fic! - pls update soon! cya!

Oh I like it I like it _ Oh and nami can also mean sea(s) as in my name _ which mean Stormy Seas. But Tsunami is a huge wave _ Update soon! _

wow...great update. I'm really looking forward to the ending, irregardless Clemi or Asmi. You go gal!

*sigh* I love Clemi fics... You just reminded me that. But it still kinda seems like Little Mermaid tho. Anyways, I'll just keep on reading. Post the next chapter up soon!

oh no...*sniff* methinks you're gonna follow the route of the actual fairy tale and not the disney version (hm...the disney ending with Clef and Umi...how sweet _)
at any rate, this fic is lovely. interesting how Clef is the stranger entering Umi's world at first...keep up the great work!

Hey, me again! I just wanted to let you know that I can't wait until you update again-you've got me intrigued... ;) Oh, BTW, Asmi or Clemi, it's all good to me! Heehee!

WHOO! Update! Finally! . It reminds me of the lil mermaid! Great chapter! Update soon! (i'll stil with the exclamations now ;;)

Hey! Great chappie! I hope to see more soon! I'm working as fast as I can on my fic... Writer's block has struck again. I hope to have it up soon! Anyways, great job on this chapter! I love the detail in this fic! Update soon! (And hopefully I will, too... .