animehpgurl 2006-05-31 . chapter 1good fic. |
Renn 2005-09-25 . chapter 1Aaw! So cute!! when I see the episode now, I won't be able to get *this* out of my mind, and I'll be grinning worryingly...thanks! |
Moshi Moshi Mai 2005-03-25 . chapter 1Haha cute! |
Shirohikari 2004-07-09 . chapter 1Wahh! This one was just as good, if not better.
The courting rituals...(lol)...the question and jealousy...love it. Spectecular. Wonderful. Hehe...lovely ending too. |
madazil 2004-05-02 . chapter 1 Aww, how cute! i loved the way you described in the beginning. :-) |
treana 2004-05-01 . chapter 1^_^ aw, how kawaii! good old karupin, lol. bringing our fav bishis together. really CLOSE together. ^^ lol. loved the fic to pieces ^_^ |
RikuNghts 2004-03-24 . chapter 1AWW! Very cute and i loved the ending! Great job! ^_^ |
Jenny-fer 2004-01-23 . chapter 1 *squeels* That was adorable!! ^o^ You wrote the monologues realistically too I found. ^_^ Great work!! ^o^ |
ephi 2003-12-14 . chapter 1 this is rather cute, but nonetheless good~
no real distracting mistakes-please write more momo+ryo! |
Ichigo Morino 2003-10-20 . chapter 1Waii! This was good! I loved it, they were awesomely in character. Bravo! Definetly the best Momo/Ryoma I've read. I'd love to read more from you any day. XD |
Ashen Skies 2003-10-20 . chapter 1sweet! not really a fan of MomoRyo, more of FujiRYo ^^ but this story has really won me over. not permanantly, though... but it's really good. the way you write is simple yet forceful, and really gets the message across perfectly. the last long paragraph in Momo's p.o.v. was very nice, loved the effect it achieve. this is -great-, hope you write more fics! |
Misster. K 2003-10-20 . chapter 1cute! Love the way Momo captures Ryoma's lips! |
burnein 2003-10-20 . chapter 1 Nee, lazy to sign in. This was so cute... I'm too stoned to come up with something more constructive than that. So cute. Hehe. |
Baki-chan 2003-10-19 . chapter 1wai! MomoRyo! i really liked, very sweet, please write more MomoRyo fics, there are NOT enough^o^! very cute, very happy to read it!
ja ne~ |
joanne 2003-10-19 . chapter 1 ur story is greaT! although not my fav.pairing... perhaps you could write a FujiRyo some other time... |