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| Amujr 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abuseHee. I like the way this begins, even if it is a little fast... but it is still good. I'm tired and out of time, so I'll give adavice later... good job, though! |
| vincent 2004-05-10 ch 7, | abusecool...keep it up! |
| DarkAngelB 2003-12-11 ch 7, | abuseDamn triplets? Thats a hell of a lot of kids to have...I heard there was some crazy ** number like 8-12 kids that this one lady had but I don't know if she survived the pregnancy. Well I think this is very good so far and that you get some more reviews soon! |
| Dragon and Sword Master 2003-11-06 ch 5, | abuseSo, is LLyod also like Sai? I do like this story, and I am glad that yup have continued after a long period of time. |
| DarkAngelB 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuseThis defnitely has a fairytale type theme to it, I love the creativity to this it really is refreshing. |
| Dragon and Sword Master 2003-10-21 ch 2, | abuseThat was cute. So the first one they are going to is Miranda, but why not go get Dart and Albert first? I mean they are near that area, so they could go there, first. I mean right? |
| Dragon and Sword Master 2003-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story. Please continue with this awesome story. So, Charle kept his broadsword for him, or is it her sword. Peace Out! |