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Reviews For: Untold Legacy: Part 2

Amujr
2004-07-10
ch 1,
abuseHee. I like the way this begins, even if it is a little fast... but it is still good. I'm tired and out of time, so I'll give adavice later... good job, though!
vincent
2004-05-10
ch 7,
abusecool...keep it up!
DarkAngelB
2003-12-11
ch 7,
abuseDamn triplets? Thats a hell of a lot of kids to have...I heard there was some crazy ** number like 8-12 kids that this one lady had but I don't know if she survived the pregnancy. Well I think this is very good so far and that you get some more reviews soon!
Dragon and Sword Master
2003-11-06
ch 5,
abuseSo, is LLyod also like Sai? I do like this story, and I am glad that yup have continued after a long period of time.
DarkAngelB
2003-10-28
ch 1,
abuseThis defnitely has a fairytale type theme to it, I love the creativity to this it really is refreshing.
Dragon and Sword Master
2003-10-21
ch 2,
abuseThat was cute. So the first one they are going to is Miranda, but why not go get Dart and Albert first? I mean they are near that area, so they could go there, first. I mean right?
Dragon and Sword Master
2003-10-19
ch 1,
abuseThis is a good story. Please continue with this awesome story. So, Charle kept his broadsword for him, or is it her sword.

Peace Out!
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