I'm not sure if you're aware of how hard it is to come across goodfic in this fandom, but I have just found some with this fanfic. Thank you so much for writing it.

The spelling and grammar were very good, so was the description, the imagry. And what can I say, I'm a sucker for the relationship between Kira and Katou. I enjoyed the characterization. A beautiful one-shot, and tomorrow I'm going to check your account to see if you have any more Angel Sanctuary fanfics, because I'm being kicked off for tonight.

once again, I LUV IT! XD

This was beautiful. I loved the rhythm and the emotion - it felt real.

Wow...That was beautiful. I love the way you told us what Katou felt, it was almost as if I felt it too. I also love the fact that you hint that Kira has strong feelings for Katou, and how Katou reacts to Kira's presence.

Anyway, very nice ^.^ It was a great Katou fiction.

-Shinju

This was great! I adore the way you ended it... and the whole idea seems to be very possible in the actual AS storyline~

hey this is sweet. i always thought that katou had like this really minor part in as (cos i only owned like vols. 15, 16, 9 and 10) but then i got the first lot and i realised that he has a huge role. it was so sad all the stuff that went on with his family I think that you've captures his psyche well.

Yay! The number of Kira/Katou fans is growing! ^_^ Good job!

Beautiful...

Wow. that was.. powerful. Beautifully written. ^_^ really enjoyed it! o0; haven't read a really good Katou fanfic in a while. ^_^ this was absolutely breath taking! Great way to decribe one of Katou;s lil 'trips' and how Kira would probly react. Really enjoyed it!

I loved reading this, especially the way you brought out Katou's vulnerability and hurting, while at the same time preserving his tough attitude (f.e. in the words he speaks to Kira). I also love the way Kira appeared in this story, silently caring, but never quite saying so. A wonderful read! ^-^

Hey that was reli good! carry on carry on!
I demand more fics!