 callosum 2009-11-19 . chapter 1Heh heh...you captured the Zoro/Sanji rivals-yet-friends dynamic really well. And the ending was PERFECT. Nice work! |
 kitsuneluvuh 2009-08-28 . chapter 1oh. my. god. I've read several stories where the boys' competitiveness reached that level, but this is by far the best. And the cleanest, but we need not go there. >:3
Anyway, kudos to Zoro for being man enough (lol pun) to not flaunt his superiority in the downstairs department. XD |
 Krentenbol 2009-04-10 . chapter 1Oh, how *suggestive*! And I loved it! :D It made me laugh out loud a lot. I especially liked this line: ""AGH!" Zoro yelled, as if he were being violated by a horde of burly seamen instead of one lovely princess." Absolutely priceless XD.
Nami and Vivi, you naughty girls! |
 Bara-Minamino 2009-04-01 . chapter 1I love you for this. Awesome humor fic, with a nice bit of (at least what I perceived to be) Sanji/Zoro. Thanks! |
 Hitokiri Dark Empress 2008-01-21 . chapter 1Oh Zoro you're so manly. Now you can prove it. ^_^ |
 Galleta 2007-09-26 . chapter 1Wow, a fic from 2003... I was looking for something funny and well written, and look what I found out, such a nice short fic. I laughed so much, I have never understood why Sanji and Zoro have to fight for everything! But Im a women after all. It was great that you managed to complete that part of the fight in Little Garden. It was like seeing them in the anime. They were in character and they were hilarious. Fantastic.
Yes! Zoro won! *im such a perv* *and im in love with him*
Thanks for sharing this. It was awesome. |
 animatedrose 2007-08-25 . chapter 1Kawaii! Sanji took care of Zolo! Maybe he could've been the doctor! I love them! And I love this story! Kawaii! |
 Hiddendemon666 2007-04-22 . chapter 1 Wooh, that was very suggestive. hahahah. the look on Zoro's face!
Zoro: damn i hate you all. thats just wrong, epsically...
Me: Espaicaly what zoro? the fact that you liked having Vivi pull down your pants?
zoro: no ** way. *Blush*
Me: unhuh. anyway great story. write more. You probably already have and i just to lazy to check. bye bye. |
 piwqefjk 2007-02-11 . chapter 1*cracks up* Oh, that's brilliant. And I love the ending xD |
 The Flying Pen 2007-02-10 . chapter 1This was EXCELLENT! Not yaoi, just perfect. :3 I loved it!
~Pen~ |
 put 2006-10-10 . chapter 1...That was a great story... |
 Omni-chan 2005-10-11 . chapter 1*blushes* Oh my! Bad Nami! |
 Tsuby 2005-09-17 . chapter 1XXD That was hilarious!! |
 Okami1 2005-06-25 . chapter 1LOL!! OMG, I about died!! I had a feeling from the title that it would escalate to something like *that* and boy was I right! Hysterical! Poor Vivi, having to do that to Zoro; poor Zoro for having that done to him; poor Sanji...well, I'm sure he just LOVED it. ;) |
 HieiLuver1 2004-09-27 . chapter 1great chp.very funny! except i'm kinda confused on wat the girls did 2 them?a wedgy?plz email me and let me know.i'd really appreciate that. thanx. |