Perfect!

IT Sucked

good

MORE MORE MORE!

LONG TIME SINCE I'VE BEEN ON THIS WEBSITE. I SEE THAT A LOT OF YOU LIEK MY STORY, THANX FOR ALL THE REVIEWS, I DUNNO QUITE YET WHEN I'M GONNA GET TO WRITING THE 3RD PART, I WROTE THIS QUITE A WHILE AGO, SO I HAVE TO REMEMBER WHERE I WAS GOING WITH ALL OF THIS. ABOUT THE FANFIC BEING GRAPHIC, I'M ONLY 15, SO ALL THE CONCEPTS OF THIS STORY I'VE TAKEN FROM THE LOVE NOVELS I'VE READ(QUITE A FEW ACTUALLY,LOL)

ANYWAYZ, I'M GLAD YOU GUYS LIKE THE STORY, AND I HOPE I'LL WRITE THE 3RD PART SOON...THANX

TATIANA

Hurry the up and finsih the story. I'm hooked. You rule!

awwww that is soooo good and sweet! write some more on sheridan and luis!

So far this is good story... keep writing. ITS GREAT!

That was really good!

pretty good :-) u watch passions? i have been and this is really good compared tuh sum othr fanfics ive read

gees... getting rather graphic here, don't you think? _- not bad, whens the next part, hmmm?

Cool...

wow that was... very very good. i loved it i hope you have the next one ready because i am ready to read it.