| Reviews for Grim Dawn |
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mimichamp 1/20/12 . chapter 10yeah down with pettigrew! hahaha! |
help 12/12/11 . chapter 3 help |
ThePerfectMess 10/25/11 . chapter 10Brilliant story, loved it so much :D |
PenNameless1994 10/22/11 . chapter 10Happy. Better. Nice set-up for continuation. |
serenityselena 10/19/11 . chapter 10great story... interesting twists _ |
gail19 10/12/11 . chapter 1 Scary, creepy, good. |
Debate4life 9/17/11 . chapter 10Really enjoyed this! Please continue it! |
musme 8/21/11 . chapter 10I like it |
mekareami 7/29/11 . chapter 10Sad that is it over but I enjoyed what you wrote. Thank you for writing and I look forward to reading more of your work. |
Ferretess xxx 7/25/11 . chapter 10Aw... :') If only this was canon! Amazing story, wonderful job! :D |
Dulcis Cantio 7/21/11 . chapter 10First and foremost, this is a lovely story and I have enjoyed it very much. I think you did a spectacular job portraying Sirius, as well as his bond with Harry. I like how you wrote Remus too, you expressed how conflicted he felt in a very realistic manner. Another thing I liked about your take on the characters was Ron's personality- I like how you made him the brother-friend, not some jealous prat. In this chapter you had a moment in Ron's perspective were he ponders "From the very first, even when he'd just learned that his companion was the famous Harry Potter, Ron had always seen the desperate need for the family that his friend had never had. And he deserves it, Ron thought to himself". I like how you didn't make him the bad guy. Your writing has a good rhythm and flow that made you story a delight to read, thanks for posting. |
RawrSaysTheLion 5/29/11 . chapter 10awwwwwwww the end almost made me cry! |
V. L. Crawford 2/5/11 . chapter 10This was a wonderful story. I just wish there was more to it. |
V. L. Crawford 2/5/11 . chapter 9This really is a great story. I just wish you would write more to it. |
V. L. Crawford 2/5/11 . chapter 3I hate that they have to trust somebody else already. |