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randomn
2009-06-25 . chapter 3
agh what the heck I'm so confused!
vampireking
2007-11-05 . chapter 3
Oh! The suspense is killin me! Anyways, I luved it!
Kidiu Anaji
2007-08-25 . chapter 3
Different clothing and eyes? I'm a little confused. Aw, I noticed the update pattern on this is about a year in between the new chapters, but its been 'two' years since you last updated. Left with a cliffhanger, too. I hope you continue this, soon.
Talia
2006-07-19 . chapter 3
I like this one but you have so many so I don't know if you'd actually finish it sigh
Ragna01
2006-01-08 . chapter 3
I just love your fics!
Nora D
2005-12-11 . chapter 3
This is cute, and I like the added drama of Ryou's relationship with Malik. I really wasn't expecting that. I'm all confused now, though! Brown eyes? Green eyes? What? Oh, wait, does Amane wear contacts, and Ryou doesn't, maybe? Or... uh, I dunno anymore. O__o I'll be checking back, though! ^__^
squigglything
2005-11-26 . chapter 3
Carmen: whoa that was really good ^__^ um i got a bit confused with the 'running into Bakura' thing but im sure it will clear up on the next chapter as the sotry goes on, anyway, awesome chapter! i really hope you update again soon! seeya!!
Miyosuke
2005-11-25 . chapter 3
Short chapter, but I loved the way you ended it. Ryou is wearing green contacts to look like Amane, right? :) Nice touch!
I liked it when Ryou tripped on the down and Malik caught him. (I like that pairing too, hehe.) Will there be some BR interaction soon? I'm looking forward to it!
LiLTakariGirl aka Yami Aro
2005-11-25 . chapter 3
Helloz Sakura-chan! I'm guessing Ryou-chan wore green contacts? *blinks* Green contacts... maybe I should get colored contacts for next year... Hm... Wellz, you made a mistake this part:
" 'Oh, Bakura! There you are!' Reiko exclaimed, breathing a sigh of relief. Anyone can see that she expected her son to not show up at all. "
Shouldn't the Reiko be changed to Satsuki? Because isn't Reiko Ryou's mother? Not Baku-kun? Iono I just noticed now... Wellz I'll see you at school, byebye!
-Hikari-chan
-Aroline
B0nz-Ein
2005-11-25 . chapter 3
hey hey!!
really interesting please write more and update soon ! i'm looking forward to it!!
Ryou VeRua
2005-11-25 . chapter 3
It's okay, as long as you update it's fine! The switch of dress and eye colour must have poor Bakura really confused...poor, poor Bakura...XD Ah well! Good chapter, I hope you update soon! *crosses fingers hopefully*
ladywolfTerri
2005-11-25 . chapter 3
Happy to see a new update! Great job! Now I can't wait to see how things go.
Mereet
2005-10-12 . chapter 2
Aww he's a cross dresser I knew it! I like the idea of hypnotism on workers, when I'm older I'll have to try it.Great stroy update soon.
Miyosuke
2005-09-18 . chapter 2
I love the plot of this story! It's absolutely unique and wonderful!

I snickered at the hypnosis bit. XD Genius. Please update soon!
Ryou VeRua
2005-08-22 . chapter 2
This is a GREAT STORY! The hypnosis had me laughing...please update soon and fast!
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