 randomn 2009-06-25 . chapter 3agh what the heck I'm so confused! |
 vampireking 2007-11-05 . chapter 3Oh! The suspense is killin me! Anyways, I luved it! |
 Kidiu Anaji 2007-08-25 . chapter 3Different clothing and eyes? I'm a little confused. Aw, I noticed the update pattern on this is about a year in between the new chapters, but its been 'two' years since you last updated. Left with a cliffhanger, too. I hope you continue this, soon. |
 Talia 2006-07-19 . chapter 3 I like this one but you have so many so I don't know if you'd actually finish it sigh |
 Ragna01 2006-01-08 . chapter 3I just love your fics! |
 Nora D 2005-12-11 . chapter 3 This is cute, and I like the added drama of Ryou's relationship with Malik. I really wasn't expecting that. I'm all confused now, though! Brown eyes? Green eyes? What? Oh, wait, does Amane wear contacts, and Ryou doesn't, maybe? Or... uh, I dunno anymore. O__o I'll be checking back, though! ^__^ |
 squigglything 2005-11-26 . chapter 3Carmen: whoa that was really good ^__^ um i got a bit confused with the 'running into Bakura' thing but im sure it will clear up on the next chapter as the sotry goes on, anyway, awesome chapter! i really hope you update again soon! seeya!! |
 Miyosuke 2005-11-25 . chapter 3 Short chapter, but I loved the way you ended it. Ryou is wearing green contacts to look like Amane, right? :) Nice touch!
I liked it when Ryou tripped on the down and Malik caught him. (I like that pairing too, hehe.) Will there be some BR interaction soon? I'm looking forward to it! |
 LiLTakariGirl aka Yami Aro 2005-11-25 . chapter 3Helloz Sakura-chan! I'm guessing Ryou-chan wore green contacts? *blinks* Green contacts... maybe I should get colored contacts for next year... Hm... Wellz, you made a mistake this part:
" 'Oh, Bakura! There you are!' Reiko exclaimed, breathing a sigh of relief. Anyone can see that she expected her son to not show up at all. "
Shouldn't the Reiko be changed to Satsuki? Because isn't Reiko Ryou's mother? Not Baku-kun? Iono I just noticed now... Wellz I'll see you at school, byebye!
-Hikari-chan
-Aroline |
 B0nz-Ein 2005-11-25 . chapter 3hey hey!!
really interesting please write more and update soon ! i'm looking forward to it!! |
 Ryou VeRua 2005-11-25 . chapter 3It's okay, as long as you update it's fine! The switch of dress and eye colour must have poor Bakura really confused...poor, poor Bakura...XD Ah well! Good chapter, I hope you update soon! *crosses fingers hopefully* |
 ladywolfTerri 2005-11-25 . chapter 3Happy to see a new update! Great job! Now I can't wait to see how things go. |
 Mereet 2005-10-12 . chapter 2 Aww he's a cross dresser I knew it! I like the idea of hypnotism on workers, when I'm older I'll have to try it.Great stroy update soon. |
 Miyosuke 2005-09-18 . chapter 2 I love the plot of this story! It's absolutely unique and wonderful!
I snickered at the hypnosis bit. XD Genius. Please update soon! |
 Ryou VeRua 2005-08-22 . chapter 2This is a GREAT STORY! The hypnosis had me laughing...please update soon and fast! |