Excellent. I basically went NO! when the last chapter ended.

Please update because this is a promising fanfic.

Nice one.

You haven't -quite- got the Mimbrate speech pattern right, but I shudder to think how I'd do at it ... I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Please update again soon...please? Please please?

I am a huge fan of the book and i think this is awesome! However, i think the drasnian family(khesan silk and liselle) should seem a bit more sly and spy like. Thats just my opinion though. I like how Polgara gets angry when things are snatched out of her control...its so like her! But I TOTALLY DISAGREE with durnik getting on polgaras nerves. I cant wait to see what happens with Belmakor...its interesting that you brought him back. But what about Belsambar? are you going to bring back beldin and belzedar as well? i guess the only way for me to find out is for you to post some more chapters so keep on writing!

Exceptionally realistic. Love how you discribe every one in this. Very Eddings. Please write more you are very talented.

I hate open ends! Even more so if it isn't an end at all! More, please? (you promised it, after all!)

This is good stuff, despite a few inconsequential grammatical errors. Keep it up!

I think that this story is amazing. It's definitely the best I've read so far.

> You don't like it, then don't read it.

OK.

-Dose the Relg dance.- Me and like four of my freinds got hyped up on pop and so we started talking about David Eddings and then daceing around yelling Relg. Anyways keep those chapters comeing. Tis really good.

wow, i never knew Polgara felt that way about the MARK...

wow so far its pretty interesting and its great that you are introducing a whole network of families...and so mayb you will update soon yes? oh incase you didnt grasp it before...i realy do enjoy your story! silk is my fav so far!

Wow...your story is really good! It fits in perfectly with the book! I love it!!

Hey, I really like the "new" story, something I couldn't say about the old version, which I found a little bit childish and superficial, if I remember correctly. But then, it's been three years, and your writing skills obviously improved since then. So, keep up the work!

I've got to say, this is perhaps the best fanfic based on eddings work that I have ever read. I know this is comming a year late, but I am sad it never got finished.

Great Job!