Reviews for Promises Remembered

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Labz 2008-07-25 ch 32,	abusedistraction? great chapter. :D lbz
nuny 2008-07-23 ch 26, anon.	abuseright about now I'd love for him to draw funny faces all over that digusting mark.
TBooki 2008-07-04 ch 43,	abuseExcellent Story! I can't wait to read the next one!
blackmage718 2008-04-08 ch 38,	abuseHey. I'd been following this when it first started and fell out of the fan fic groove. I've been rereading this over the weekend and have fallen back in love. I just wanted to let you know. =) Can't wait to continue on to PD.
Pandora of Ithilien 2008-03-22 ch 15,	abuseum... i have no clue if this is on purpose, but your chapter 15 appears to be missing. just thought you should know.
mountainelements 2008-03-11 ch 5,	abuseWhat happened about the Fidelius Charm?
AribethDA 2008-03-09 ch 36,	abuseTHIS IS IT! I have already read all of the stories you wrote about the UU, but I'm reading them again because I have gotten this confused with the other stories I have been reading in between updates. And in this chapter - when they are in the hall and just figured out there was a traitor in their midst to be exact - is when I realized that Ari could be an adult and Auror, instead of in school with Harry. Yes it makes no sense to you, but Ari is a character in a horribly complex story that is written only in my head (it extends out of Harry Potter and into just about every book that I've read, movie I've seen, story I've heard etc. and ones that I haven't) I have tried to write it down, feel free to read it, it is a story on FFN, but it sucks and was abandoned before I reveal anything that would make this review make sense. Long story short and mangled Ari lived on Middle Earth (Lord of the Rings, she's and elf) but she desperately needed a vacation and so went to Hogwarts (she was made to look eleven and human, and it makes a lot more sense with lots more explaining) she was one of the Marauders, and they were all as close as the original 4. Then they grew up and then Ari found out she had to go through Hogwarts with Harry, so she made it look like she got blown up when Peter (although everyone though it was Sirius) killed all the people and turned into a rat. Then she goes through school with Harry and she has to prevent outside forces from messing up what is supposed to happen (what happens in the book). So in the UU, she was growing up and going to school with Harry, but the Maruders were all still alive and I wanted her to be in some of the Auror raids and Diogon Ally Massacer and be around the Maurades a lot, but it didn't make sence because she was a kid. Then as I was reading this chapter the first time, it hit me, she was an Auror. Suddenly everything made sence and worked much better and now, with FF at least, she is mostly an adult. This new outlook has completely changed the Ari story for the better. And this is now a long review with a mangled story that probably makes no sense (it is way better in my head and all of the questions you have formed by the strange gaps are filled, I just didn't want to bore you with the details) but I wanted to say that I am eternally grateful that your story gave me the adult Ari idea, and I'll admit it is somewhat simple, and I might have come up with it eventually, but still. Funny thing is, with adult Ari going into Promises Remembered, it changed slightly and Ari isn't even in the room when Macmillan was discovered, odd how things work (yes Ari plays in important roll in the UU in my head, I put her in all of the fanfiction I read, but don't worry, all the main things are the same)
JustAnotherCrazyWriter 2008-02-15 ch 7,	abuseI hope you know you've left me in tears. I liked how Dumbledore said that Regulus was in fact a good man in the end. And the 'dear friend' is Snape, I'm guessing? I have a strong feeling it's him. "The owls began arriving as dawn approached, coming one by one in the darkness." When I reread the first paragraph, that sentence somehow sticks out as kind of daunting. And also, of course, this line, "Let the darkness come." I found myself wanting to know who got what gift from Dumbledore, and what was in their letter, and in my head that earns applause from me. claps I've read the whole story up to chapter 13 but I went back and put in a review here because it stuck out to me the most. It was written kind of differently to the other chapters, and I think that actually brings out some of the characters. There were some funny moments in this chapter that made me laugh, more so because the rest was so sad. For all of your story up to where I've read, is written beautifully and some moments left me on the edge of my seat, thanks for that, it's been a while I've read a good, exciting novel-length story. All in all, I love it!
Morwen Elda 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseThis is a fantastic story, and I'm not sure if I should kick myself for waiting so long to read it, or be glad that I didn't have to deal with the suspense of waiting for the next chapter.
YuriyTalaIvanov 2008-01-14 ch 43,	abuseah!! u just end it here?!! Rarr!! REALY REALY nice fic!! ^_^ i really love how ou keep switching back and forth between harry and sirius for the prophacys...and one can really see that sirius is changing and difernt and turning into voldemort
YuriyTalaIvanov 2008-01-13 ch 6,	abuseomg..this chapter made me cry!its so sad!!
LadySwiftwing 2007-12-18 ch 4,	abusethis is a brilliant story. i have read promises unbroken and till here n one night but sadly have togo to bed.
Lilykins 2007-12-01 ch 43,	abuseSo, I stumbled across Promises Defended a long time ago and since then, I have been reading through Unbroken and Remembered, starting and stopping whenever I could find time. Finally, I am done with Remembered and am so looking forward to starting Defended. I just wanted to let you know that these books are amazing and you are a fantastic writer. Keep it up... you'll hearing from me whenever I catch up on Defended again. Good work!
Luci 2007-12-01 ch 35, anon.	abuseI love the image you created in my head of Sirius and Voldemort having dinner together. It's just so odd, I love it!
mrrobertsiii 2007-11-16 ch 43, anon.	abusegreat fic. love all the action.

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