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DCCDchick
2007-11-10
ch 11,
abusei love this!
Rach2503
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuseIt's the second time i read this story, and it's always a pleasure to do it. I hope one day you are going to finish the story.
freakyClaudia
2007-01-01
ch 3,
abuse[He set the gun on the coffee table and took her hands in his. "I thought you'd never ask."]
I LOVED this. Just imagining Sark doing this really cracked me up.

[He snorted once in his sleep and then awoke just as suddenly.]
I couldn't stop laughing when I got to this, even though it's not THAT funny, it just made me laugh.
I'm a freak. I don't think that needs anymore explaining. ;)
freakyClaudia
2007-01-01
ch 1,
abuseRereading this! I forgot how much I loved it. That last sentence is my favorite of the chapter. AMAZING job.
HopelesslyConfussed
2006-10-18
ch 11,
abuseI just love this Story can you please update this story is just great I love it please
give-you-back
2006-08-06
ch 11,
abuseI can't believe it ended there... It's been years and you've probably forgotten about this story but geez...you gotta come back and finish it... please?
explodeychik
2006-06-22
ch 11,
abuseOh, this is such a great story, I can't believe that is where it has ended. You must come back to it one day, pleease ! :)
CandyCentric
2006-06-19
ch 11,
abuseThis is such a great story! It's a shame you've left it uncompleted. Any chance of seeing another update to it? It really deserves one ;)
xofalling2deep
2006-05-03
ch 11,
abuseYeah, you're going to need to continue! This is really good, you can't just leave us hanging. I know it's been like a YEAR since you've updated this story, but there's no time like the present! Seriously, UPDATE.
secretguest
2006-04-21
ch 11, anon.
abuseUh oh...Sydney's dad is there! I hope he doesn't kill Sark! I can't wait to read what you have next! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
suzanne
2006-02-28
ch 11, anon.
abuseI love this story, please hurry and write more chapters. This story is very good. I Love It!
staidan26
2006-02-07
ch 11, anon.
abusePlease update you fic! I love it!
lucy
2006-01-23
ch 11, anon.
abuseupdate please
Celestial0789
2006-01-05
ch 11, anon.
abuseomg! please continue, you've got me hooked! XD
qblisa
2006-01-03
ch 1,
abuseHi, just wanted to say that I really love your story. Your style is easy to read. You write Sark's character well (which is hard to do). At times Sydney seemed too needy, but I realise she was in-and-out of the Julia character. I hope you finish this story soon. I would love to read what happens next... Maybe a sequel.
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