I just read your story and was bummed when I got to the end and found that it is not finished yet. I hope that you decide to finish it some day soon. It was really good.

cute. wish your updates were longer and more eventful though!

This is great...and if you still need a beta, my email is in my profile. I'd be happy to beta for you.

LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON

pls update soon !! why can u do it??

Interesting... both going kinda crazy there...

I liked the first half, update soon!

good start update asap!

haha i like this story its not totally original but what trory is ahah though i like your take on it its interesting

great job...update soon...get rory and tristan together

Hey!

This was another really cute chapter and I enjoyed reading it.

Bye, smile :-)

I was very shocked and disapointed that Dean and Rory slept together and I wish they bring Tristan back... Any who uh I can't wait for your next chapter

Hi! Love your story the coffee thing was really funny ...
And I liked how you started the chapter witout changing to much of the story...(Marty could of been funny but he turned Rory down... so I like your version WAY better...
I also like how you describe Dean(BECAUSE I REALLY DESPISE(?),HATE HIM!
I saw the previews and they almost make me sick... seying them together they are running the happiness that should come to the fans with the whole Luke-and-Lorelai-are-FINALY_together thing...
Hope the show improve (they should take some of your ideas...(lol) bye lily

Wait do they sleep toegther AGAIN?? Cause I knew they did last season which really sucks. But if they do it again then I may just have to call up the writers of this show!! I hope you start to write more soon. Great job so far! :)

ur totally right this show is going down hill. i wish they would bring tristan bavk but that would mean no more one tree hill. excellent story! update soon!