very cute

You just totally destroyed Faye's character. Since when is she a simpering, weak, helpless damsel who needs to be rescued, swoon at kisses, and let's herself be ordered around by Spike? And for that matter, Spike's behavior is pretty jacked too.

very very very very very good...i really liked it.

that was great i really liked it.

"not in a sombody-smoked-my-last-cigarette upset" that is probably the sweetest line in your story. because its sweet and humorous at the same time. this is a great story.
but i think faye would be a little more stronger than that but its your story and i loved it! =D

dude, i like this story alot, and i like nosey little reporters. *adds to favortites* yey!

Fluffy, but still believable! Very well done.

"Faye had finally gotten fed up with always opening the refrigerator door to nothing but empty disappointment." Your word choices are really nice here. And Spike is just how we like him, still the bad@ss and yet showing he's got just a bit of a sweet gooey center. Keep up the good work!

Dude. That was the BEST S/F one-shot I've ever read. That could be made into an episode. I mean, if an entire movie could happen between episodes 19 and 20, couldn't this happen? That would be awesome. I can really picture them acting like that. Ed was hilarious, as usual.

hehe! that was great! (well not the part with Faye almost getting raped, but the rest of it) All the characters were very IC and the dialogue was true to the show. At the beginning, when Faye kept reffering to herself as 'we' I thot she was pregnant! But then you explained it, so I understood. I liked this story a lot. Keep up the good work!
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Good! I wanted to do a Bebop fic but I don't think I would do the siries justice... And this is good! Now, GO UPDATE YOUR YYH FIC! NOW! (you do know I will bug you until it's updated...)

Not bad. I can only offer one suggestion, and that would be to watch which tense you're writing in. It slips a few times at the beginning, but no biggie.

Secondly, Spike went OOC towards the end when he kisses Faye. I like how you did the whole "He seemed genuinely upset. Not in a sombody-smoked-my-last-cigarette upset, but more in a something-almost-happened-to-someone-I-care-about upset" which fits Spike well. But there would definately need to be a better reason for him to just kiss her.

That was sweet. Pretty good for a romance story. It moved a LEETLE fast but that's it; otherwise it was good. And for a one shot, great.