Good very good a okay

Wai, a Petra fic, finally! God, I have spent too long looking for these things... Ahem. I really like it, especially the idea that Petravina wasn't a bad person until Darkie got to her. Surreal and very, very cool. (is her real surname Dagmar? I've been trying to find out, but...)

Ummmm, intersting

...That...was really cool...

I liked it, not alot of people write about Petra. Keep up the good writing!

um,that was okay , weird but okay .

That was interesting. I don't really like the poem mixed in with the tale though. Pretty good writing on the other hand.

Hope to see more,

C