 Strixvaria 2006-11-25 . chapter 3can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Strixvaria 2006-11-25 . chapter 2cool, and sorry I'm so late reviewing! |
 Poison's Ivy 2006-10-26 . chapter 3I'm actually glad you didn't use Slade. I honestly cannot remember if I read this before, but oh well. Anyways, Slade is too commonly used. Even I use him for like_2 of my stories (I use Red X for the rest, but not all my stories are Teen Titans ya know)
This is apparently the re-edited version. I like it! It gave off a twist in the beginning cuz I thought it would be Billy Numerous, but now BAM! Surprise.
I have one concern though. You say the guy's name is Cocytus, the stealer of abilities. If he is the brother of the Master of Games (w/e), shouldn't she at least she the similarities between the two? I mean, Raven is vErY perceptive. She would notice something like that.
You hate Robin a lot, don't you? At this point, I do too. I usully pair up my favorite characters, not the ones who are meant to be together, but the ones I like the most. So really, I'm more into Red X/Rae now... Darn.
I can't believe I'm analyzing a TV show. I have no life now. (Kidding, I do have a life)
Better go change that on my profile. |
 ChErRyBlOsSoMs-FlOwErOfDeAtH 2005-07-16 . chapter 3Interesting...UPDATE! =D |
 evilsangel 2005-07-08 . chapter 2HI, I love your writing! its some of the best i've read! please update asap! bye |
 Queen of the Leos 2005-07-06 . chapter 1Is this really the end? But what happens?! Oh well. I know i can't change your mind, but god damn, I HATE ROBIN RIGHT NOW! You make him seem like a total jerk, which he can be. You are also right about the love making people stupider. I just want to kill him and Starfire for kissing. But then again I always want to kill Starfire. Do you think you could do an alternate ending to this like some other fanfic authors have done. Or like a sequal or something? |
 Realsmartz 2005-07-05 . chapter 3OH MY GOD I LOVE U! Ok not literally cuss that would be so gross. I just never met a fellow *cough*robinhater*cough*. So ne way good story(even though the chapters got a lil short) And I still think Robin is very blind, stupid, starloving, well before i go on a rant let me stop my self. Can't wait for you to update!^_^ |
 Raven of Dark Dreams 2005-07-04 . chapter 3 Good writing! I'm kinda confuzzled though. I thought this was a Rae Rob story. That moment with Star and Rob got me a bit puzzled. |
 Raven of Dark Dreams 2005-07-04 . chapter 2 awesome story!Keep on writng! |
 kool 2005-07-01 . chapter 3 hm...
i agree, robin really does deserve a good bashing, at least for the way he is acting in this fic.
excuse my lord of the rings refrance, but in a way he is just like legolas, he can be a total jerk, a player, hopelessly romantic, gay... the list goes on and on. |
 neetfreek 2005-07-01 . chapter 2 cool, wierd, depressing, confusing
i need to go read the next chapter |
 neetfreek 2005-07-01 . chapter 1 ha, very evil |
 strwbrrydaquiri 2005-06-28 . chapter 3This is really awsome! I can't wait to read more! I could push Robin off the tower right now though, and strangle Star too for that matter. But anyway! :) |
 Dark and Misunderstood 2005-06-27 . chapter 1I love the story so far. I love it when one of the titans gets kidnaped ecspecially Raven. You're story is awesome. Keep writing. |
 dark heart 2005-06-27 . chapter 3 not bad, but can the chapters be a tennsy bittle bit longer? pleez ^-^' update soon! |