To Black knight:

Eliza Urban? Mary Sue? *bursts out laughing*

oh wow! this is good! you should write! UPDATE!!

This storyy is good. Please write more! Make the Mulch madllion thing work for Artemis' memory.

WRITE MORE!!WE LIKE THIS!!OR SANITY DEPENDS ON IT!!Oh to late.

Cool u like LOTR? V.good story by far the best artimas (sp?) fic I have read so far UPDATE now ! ^o^ HE HE

I like. I think, however, that you have NOT WRITTEN ENOUGH!
Keep it up. Unite them against something from Lower Elements. Perhaps Root goes berserk? Liza needs more brainpower than has been demonstrated.
That will be all, Jeeves.

Your story is really good,(cough)Lia! Although if you've read your views...Excuse me while I go laugh mancicually.Liza Urban a mary sue, how sweet!
~Laughing hysterically~
You better reply to the author's review telling them that Liza Urban is not a mary sue!
See ya around,
Ariela of the Faeries
(You should know who that is if you've talked to Randir lately.)

hey good story,
some of it was kinda unbelievable*cough comandos cough* but good anyway

Keep writing

Artemis's eyes are blue. Not indigo.

And the commando scene was a little unrealistic.

But other than that, it was good! smooth flow, good writting, nice grammar and decent vocab. I see potential! Keep on writting, if the plot is good, this will be grerat. Watch out though, make sure Eliza Urban is NOT a mary sue, as this would probably destroy the story. :-/ She already has a semi-unusual name, so watch out :-)

And if you have the time, please read and review my fiction! Thank you! :-)