update soon

I had to go back a few chapters to be able to review...

I justr eread your story ^^! As I did back then I still love it. Kinda sad it wasn't updated.

I am confused with the ages though...

Chichi is 38 and yet Pan is ten?? Is that physically possible... that means.. chi had gohan at 15 and gohan had pan at what?..13?.. or both were 14... I'm sorry I was really confused... I know the ages are wrong but isn't that a bit much?... Not flaming just pointing out...

what is their $$%&/ problem.. is their mother, she cares for them, t all of the. grow up with her because her father was messing around and she was the support because kakaroto in his entire life never work

they are the unfaithful they betray her all of them

great job i like your fanfic

i am in love with this story. my husband hates the way vegeta is... but i just told him if he doesnt like it then he should quit reading over my shoulder! keep the updates coming!

Woah! This is great!!

Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!

Ouuhh I'm curious now! Who'll show up... I wonder..

I love your story! It's so AWESOME! It's so cool! it's magnificent! LOLz... I've wanted to review on other chapters, but my eyes are itching to read MORE! I can't help it! I read non-stop! Anyways... I love the way the characters act... uhm... why isn't Bra in the latest chapter? well... she wouldn't understand much of it anyway... LOLz

the only thing that I don't like about Chi chi is that she cries too much... but hey, I wouldn't like her any other way... LOLz

about Vegeta, he one told Gohan and Goten that he loves chi chi, but not, he keeps on denying it... like he only mates not love... but he could've just said love last time, based on instinct... and his mind have been clouded at that time... LOLz

in short, the story has been perfectly done, and I'm hoping to read more!real soon!

Wow update soon

Well well well its about time. i am enjoying this fic. keep up the good work. update soon. ( and by soon im hoping sometime within this month, or year perhaps :-p ) Peace.

OMg this was so good please write more vegeta x chi chi

Love your story!! I did notice that your last post was in 06... thus I don't know if you actually read your reviews... I thought I should write one anyways. This story is great!! I find it sad that it doesn't continue further. It would be awesome if you would suddenly decide to continue it!! Or something...

VegeChi's are hard to find... Good VegeChi's are even harder.. I'm happy I found yours ^^!!

Hoping for more from you... HOPING REALLY HARD! >

Awesome. I like the way you pulse the readers with the feelings going on between chichi & Vegeta. I kinda wish it just been a one night stand but i cant help but to be intregued by the whole neck claming thing. I see its been a while sence you up dated. I would love to see this finshed but im not going to complain cause hell, I have a fic fans beg me to finish & i havent got back to. Good work. Love the lemon part.

Hey,
I like your story.
You have a great Idea and you know how to put in words.
The only thing is your spelling and puncuation.
For example, make sure you use the right word: sense and since sound the same, but they aren't.
Puncuation-wise, make sure you use them properly, oe else you get a whole different sentence then you wanted.
If you need someone to preview a chapter for you, you can send it to me.

i had to reread this fic of yours...something told me not to cause you haven't updated or completed this yet...its been two yrs since i started reading this and me havin to reread to understand those chaps made me fall in love w/ this fic all over again and that so sucks so now im just gonna beg you to update soon or i might have to take so drastic steps after all its been 2 yrs so its quite obvious that you can't get rid of me that easily^^

I love this story!

Wow, I really really love this story. Its so interesting. I want to read more.