heh, that's a good one :)I've never picked Thrawn for a family man (although I wouldn't mind marrying him myself ;)), but here he is and it's great! Good sense of humor, You gave me a really great time, thanks a lot :)

I really love this story. It's great that you have added so much personality and background for Thrawn. I especially love the family you created for him. The pool incident was great!

Oh... my... god ! *chokes with laughter* I've rarely read something like that... well, actually, I've never read quite something like that. Thrawn getting married ! Hmm, and you did choose the greatest of all Imperial commanders (from my humble point of view). Okay, I'll admit it - I have a thing for cool commanders.

Congratulation on a piece of work very pleasant to read, with some suspense and a nice little plot. At some times, Thrawn did act kinda OOC, but then, what do we really know about his character ? And most of the time, he was perfectly like himself. As for Drake, she wasn't a stereotypical character, and she's really likeable.

There's only the thing with Chiss names - I read this book from Timothy Zahn, and all the names were made on the model Mitth'raw'nuruodo, instead of which you had normal names and family names for all the Chiss. But I guess you did it on purpose. And it's really not important.

At any rate, I really loved this story. I'll have to read the sequel when I'm a bit less tired. Hope there's Niriz in it - it's just funny when he's thinking about the Admiral's weird ideas... And I like him.

such an awesome fanfic^^ *adds this one to favs* please continue

I've actually read this story many times over, and I must say I still enjoy it as I would a novel. Bravo! :-)

Aww!! I'm glad they finally got their acts together! ;) Very nice ending. :D Did I hear a rumor about a sequel? There'd better be one...

Great story! Niriz is so cute, and I love it when Thrawn gets all romantic. Sequel maybe?

aw! it's the end!

Remind me...what happened yesterday and what did you not mean that way? lol e-mail or here is fine

And my litle thing has been sent to you...it's about your story..and I forget what else ya asked.

YES! SEND ME THE SEQUELS! YOU MUST! LOL

Hey! I have, infact, informed my roommate that you are not a guy, nor are you gay...

Nother cliffhanger! tsk tsk...shame on you...leaving all these people in suspense...;p

Hey, I was gonna just e-mail u bout this, but my e-mail doesn't like me and it won't let me access my account. stupid hotmail!
I read all your stuff (thumbs up--I cried at the...yknow :)) And i felt inspired by your creative genius to write a little scene myself...I'll send it to you if ya want~it's not great, but it's um...entertaining...and Rated R, most likely...at least a heavy PG 13...lol

Keep up the good stuff! I went home for the long vet's day weekend, so I don't have my computer w/ me...hence me not being on aim..lol

Wow!! A Thrawn fic! And a good one, too. :D Liking this much, very intriguing and such. Can't wait for more!!

yeah another chapter. It is a wonderful story keep up the good work.

There's nothing wrong with Thrawn going OOC, as you've written it quite well, with the tactical genius appearing when needed.

I look forward to your new chapters with anticipation boiling over.

good ol' matinee...sucks being on a budget..

It worked finally!! I dunno what was up with it..I probably just tried to access it when you were putting it up or somethin~

My other roomie likes your story too! (I've got two, a girl and guy who's like an older brother) I left it on the screen and he was reading it when I got back from getting ice cream!
He read the *naughty* part, raised his eyebrows, and said, "so is this author a guy or a girl?" lol So we had a stupid argument about whether or not the name "Chris Steel" was, #1: your real name, #2, a guy's or girl's name, and #3, whether or not the chipmunk's music is good. And you think you don't have a life. lol j/k

Update soon!! I'm so addicted to this story it's sad...oh well! update anyways! My SN is Jayla1717..I left you a message while you were away. I have several sn's, but I ain't "sweetandhot." nope nope nope

Excellent story so far, however, Thrawn seems WAY OOC, a drunken Thrawn does not fit.

Though it is your fic, the characters are yours to do with as you please.

Umm...it's me again and I thought you'd like to know that Chapter 20 isn't there...something about it "not existing".