And so the plot thickens! Please update this story soon, I want to see more - what was the plan? Why is Harry unconcious? Does he remember his normal (teh books) life in this world where Neville is the hero. Does he have a set of memories for the other world?

Why did Snape switch his hate - wasn't it because Harry's father was a jerk to him that he hated him (Harry)? Are they're any more Maurauders maps? Do I ask to many questions?

Desperate to know more...
~Qem

Hi, this is a really great story. It seems kinda confusing at first though. I hope the next chapter will explain it better. Im guessing Harry is being given this chance to have a normal life...am i right? Its still blurry. An excilent idea though. Hurry with the next chapter!

You should write more chapters!
I can't wait for more to come out!
Keep writing!

More please! Your fic was on a thread on FA, and I like the start but I'd like to see more!

Okay, now you got me lost here! Harry not remembering that he played Quidditch? when did that happen? last chapter was about how Voldemort decided that Neville is the one, so that's changing the whole story from the very beginning! and that means that Harry's parents are alive, so in sum, I understood nothing, sorry for that mate, but you have this rushing-everything stories! please, let us understand! not that I don't like the story, it's unique, but--slow down!

ok that was interesting. please go on.

I really like it!

Brilliant fic! Great description! Why was I not told of this earlier?! By the way...
WILL YOU HURRY UP AND REGISTER ME PLEASE!

*claps* aarie, keep going, i wanna know when does neville come into this? its a good idea, update soon! btw, i am phoenix_fire_goddess from the arty fowl fan group...just in case you wanted to know:P bubye!

Hi
This is a review to all your stories: they are quite good, interesting and tragic, are you going to continue any of them? I feel quite confident that you'll do good if you write a long fic.
Thank you for reviwing, by the way.
Please, write a long fic, PLEASE!

Good, a bit wordy, but well considered writing. I'd carry this on, its a good theme, if tricky to do, only break up the text a bit. Can't wait to hear what the plan is! And how'd you think Neville parents would be like?