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| luxor 2003-10-27 ch 3, | abuseOh yes! What a sweet resolution. So glad Gris came to his senses. I liked your Strong!Sara. She got the job and her man! Yay! Please treat us to more of your stores soon. |
2003-10-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseA lovely story that perfectly captured Sara and Grissom's characters. Well done :-) |
| And Also With You 2003-10-23 ch 3, | abuseYou've made me so happy! This was perfection. So many really awesome lines...I love the "drink wine and dance all night" Ugh...I'm melting. And the "too late, Sara. I'm outside your door" HA! Sneaky guy. Your really so good at these fics. Go write another. Please? |
| chimpy 2003-10-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI really love where this is going. Everything is in character and you've set Sara's dilemma up really well. |
| Peggie 2003-10-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseMuch as I have grown to dislike Catherine, could she share the latest GSR with me too? As expected, an excellent premise and an excellent story. More soon, I hope... |
| And Also With You 2003-10-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, I just love your stories. So glad there's a new one. This is very good. Love Sara's "backpeddling"--all flustered and making it worse. Grissom better move it. You too--update soon. ;) |
| Barb8 2003-10-22 ch 1, | abuseWonderful start. Hope you post more real soon. Barb |
| luminol_leese 2003-10-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh i so can't wait for more :D :D :D keep it up, love ur work Lisa |
| luxor 2003-10-21 ch 1, | abuseOh, I *like* this Sara. In charge of herself and going after what she wants. Long past time for that! Can't wait to see where you take us. Speculate away! I like your version of what should happen so far. Please continue soon! |
| csi424 2003-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove it, awesome title too! Please update soon. |
| Anansay 2003-10-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is so well written: "all nervous energy and pent up annoyance echoing in each step and abrupt turnabout of her heels." I like the dialogue, it flows well, very in character. For some reason, I really like angry Sara. *smile* She gets 'work' done. And, of course, I cannot wait for this to be continued, so please do not let us wait too long. (I know, I really shouldn't be saying that *coughidoittoocough*) :) |