Woww,
that's the best story I've ever read. Please continue!
It's a very unique story and I like it very much because it's so unconventional. Please post the story line at least.
kevin22

plz update your story soon, i really like it and i wanna know what else will happen. :)

First of the story is amazing.I really liked that it was totally different than the original aod story for once and bad Kurtis is gold:D Though of course he's good on the inside.;)

When it comes to daniel i can't really picture lara with such a guy but that's just me:pKurtis and Lara forever baby!

I would bow down and kiss your feet if you updated this some day. :)
Seriously, this is one of the most interesting fan fics I've read in a long time. I was sad to find this unfinished.

cool, luv it so far. =) please update soon!

MORE! lol... i think you get the picture! ;]

Wow I really love this story, FB!
The sexual tension between Lara and Kurtis is priceless and its interesting to see a fic with them on opposite sides. Makes it that much more suspenseful ;)
PLEASE update x CF

This is a fantastic story, I'm like hooked. :D *claps* One of the best written stories I've read *adds to favorites* :D
Can't wait for the next chapter.
LOVE IT :) XOX

This is the kind of thing that's hard to come by. It has all the elements that make up a good story, and it's very far removed from most LC/KT pairing stuff we usually see. It's very fluid and enjoyable, in other words, I LOVE IT!
I sincerely hope you haven't given up on this and plan on doing something with it soon...please? I need my bad Kurtis fix ;)

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I REALLY REALLY WISH YOU WOULD CONTINUE THIS! x_x
i love it! x]
please?? hopefully you do. :3

Very interesting story, and I hope you come back to it soon. But I can tell, that you take your time, and that is fine

I'm not one for love-hate relationships, but it's very well written. ;)

this is such an awesome and thrilling fanfic please don't cut it off.

i love the story. its original and i like how shes getting dragged back to egypt.i also like how kurtis isnt exactly the good guy and they dont immediately fall in love and live happily ever after. plz update soon since i am hooked already!

Another brilliant fic from you!
Please dont keep us waiting another year for an update!