Love your portrayal of Battusai. It was hilarious! Good job!

So... If Kenshin has one hand on Kaoru's neck and one hand holding up her towel, what's holding up his towel? Ô.Ô

Heh heh heh.

Fun story, pretty well written, some interesting things going on with punctuation and capitalization, but overall I liked it.

Lmfao.. Now that was funny XD

Ari chan

Haha, that was pretty amusing, yet nice at the same time. Sounds like something Sano and Yahiko would do too :)

Ah, that was great. :) I loved all of Battousai's comments. He's funny. :)

THIS IS AWESOME! I cracked up when I heard Battosai. He's Kenshin's conscious, albeit not a good one. I'm adding this to my favorites!

I don't really go for the split personality view of Kenshin, but in your hands? Funny! I liked the whole build up and the attack in the city resulting in a visit to Saito.

Found this delightfully humorous story today, and all I have to say is: Ha.

OMG! Frickin' hilarious!

wow i loved it especially the bit about his pink gi. i mean i v thought that it made him look gay for ages and its funny to hear someone actually comment on it :) i was hoping for a little bit more action with the whole bad men harassing women. there was quite a possibility to use that to advance the plot and i dont c the point of adding it in if its not used. jst a thought. really funny tho

So cute! Not to mention hilarious...

"Oro!" Kenshin muttered.

'Oro my ass. More like come one step closer and I will make you into a woman.'

Now that line had me suffocating on my own laughter...not to mention the "Hot Damn!" Battosai said near the end.

You were fantabulous with making such a serious character into a comedic one.

Great job!

hahahahaha! that was really good! i especially enjoyed the conversations between battousai and kenshin! hahaha they made me laugh! but i loved it all!

everyday-snowagnel

That was so good! Wow...i dont even know what to say lol. Great writing

Lol! Classic. _

absolutely the best KxK oneshot i've ever read. battousai was so hiliarious... poor kenshin!

sequel please!