oh my god that was so good... i wish for you to up-date soon i want to know what happens next. please continue.

OMFG! I am begging you to write another chapter! This story is freaking awesome! Please o please lemme read some more of this! Thank you! *bows*

Haha, I don't think I've ever a fic that's quite as gory as yours. I mean, Kagami got mutilated?!? This must be some crazy plot twist or that's one hell of an illusion. Not to mention, what was he doing there anyways? Did he just decide one day to stop residing in Babylon City and go explore the creepy wonders of a haunted Pagoda?

Anyways, I can't wait till Ban and Ginji reunite...they seem so lost without each other! Poor Ginji too, he seems to be the only victim of this faceless monster. What the hell did he ever do to him/her?? >:/ Oh btw, just a small note. I think you should tone down a bit on Ginji's verbal/mental swearing. It's not that I'm a moral freak or anything but I'm not sure I recall him ever swearing much in the manga or anime. It was mostly Ban. :)

Well, I look forward to an update soon! Although, it seems quite impossible right now... The last time you updated was in 2004! :( Please don't lose interest on this story or fandom. It's really good, honestly.

P.S- I can't help but wonder...how would Akabane react to all this? I can bet a million that it resembles quite closely to his fantasy home or his virtual paradise. :D

Ack! Ok. Please, please, PLEASE don't loose interest until you finish this. Because at this rate, I am DYING to know what's going on...

woow! this is just like a stephen king book, oy not boring and in vocab i can actuly understand ^^;! a lots more graphic than r.l.stine, tho. aw, i luv every minute of this!

the gore, the suspese, the emotiol bond between friends...iluvitiluvitiluvit! i hope you plan to finish this. if you dont, that's okay. at lest i got to read the firsts of this awesome fic! either way, more power to ya!

Oh, my, goodness. This story is so awesome! So extremely crepy! You did a great job keeping everyone in character, and yet were able to change the atmosphere so drastically. Thanks for writing this so far. I see you haven't been back at it for a long time now (Goodness knows I'm procrastinating too...) But it would be so nice for you to continue this story, or at least find a way to end it within a couple chapters. This is a work that deserves to be finished. You get my Anime Smile of Aproval(tm) *^_^*

Wow, I'm really impressed! I completely hooked! You seem to have captured Ban and Ginji's personalities quite well and the banter between them is priceless. :) I wish I had the guts, (no pun intended) to write great, gory, horror stories like yours. You writing is very good and you've got a definite style. Please update soon! ...No pressure

Very nicely done. I thought that you've written it very well, not to mention that your use of emotive and evocative language and imagery was very effective. Please write more!
^_~
DreamWeaver

Welp 'twas worth the wait. It is easy to see a difference in style and proficiency between this and earlier chapters, but hey it's all good ^^ This was fun! I'm curious about the rest and what's to come...

And finally you've u-dated! Hope the next one won't take this long.
Ginji's turning into raitei is he? Warghh! Poor Ban! Worrying 'bout his partner all da time! Feh..diz dream sure is a nightmare.

Want to hear a review about the plot, ask me about chapter three. Want to hear about the writing...listen to me talk about chapter four.
None of this seems like your writing style at all. It's not bad--although this chapter compared to chapter one (the prologue was good but chapter one was distressing) deserves the title of GOOD. By itself, without the comparison, it's still great--no wham-bam imagery like chapter three, but nice. The writing was better, even I liked chapter three more--I could not tell you why chapter four's writing is better. Word choice?
I liked how you used "voltage" instead of the word "electricity" when referring to the smell of the string-room; you could have used electricity, since it hadn't been overused there, and it would've made more sense then because electricity, or rather, ozone, has a smell--voltage doesn't. It's a measurement, which you know, meaning you used the word on purpose. It's a good idea, because a close observer would pause, wonder about its meaning at that point and thus draw his attention to the words used in that scene. Usually that's not a good thing, but here it is. Why? No idea.
I did not remember the hallway's meaty aspect until I read it, although at some parts in those scenes I thought, "Hey, I remember being consulted about some of these lines." I like the room Ban was trapped in more this time, although the section of that scene that I read earlier made it feel more like a narrow box.
I skipped over the description of the alarm clock but somehow knew it was red anyways. I knew Kagami's heart-or-lack-thereof was the section of his body hanging over Gin's face because I read it. Whether that's typical horror-logic or our fabulous ESP, I have no idea.
The refrain of "find(ing) his way out of the damn house" is exceptionally worth noting, as it is possibly the best element you've ever imployed in any of your writing. Seems lame but is not. I loved it.
"The hairs on the back of Ban’s neck prickled. 'Ginji,' he whispered into the darkness. Something was wrong with his partner." Something about those three lines as a separate scene is very, very good. I think it's statement of the obvious lent a certain element to the mood--it wasn't "He felt something wrong with Ginji"--its lack of specifics! That's it, hot damn. Anyways, it's cool.
Eh, the suspense with Ginji reaching for the candle was good, but you already knew that.
"The wooden walls were greasy. Slimy. Decayed. Blackened and gnarled with age. Splatters of blood garnished with golden film decorated the walls, sticky rivulets of sap sliding slowly down the crumbling timber. Ban heard the scurrying of thousands of termites, eating away at the rot." That...and two scene from chapter three. Mm. Imagery.
"After making sure it stood up on its own, he crawled from the corridor back into the room he’d discovered and peered around." Ban crawling. Snort.
Is Ban's hair up or down in this chapter? It changes in my mind.

PLEASE UPDATE! please please please! *jumps around like a wild monkey*

OMG... this is so f-ing cool! You must update! I hope Ban and Ginji can find each other and get out of there before it's too late!
Geuna~

continue please! i'm dying to know d ending

Listen to me! I don't know if you left this rude review in my story "How much i hate you and Wow" because your an idiot or an ASS! Why do some of you have tol leave personally rude reviews? Does it make you feel big or what in your sick minds? You have not even told me why you dislike my story, but YOU have the ADACITY to tell me that my story stinks or may be it's your VOMIT!
You better not review me again if this is how you review stories. I work hard on my stories and it is obvious that you are close mided from the limited animes or whatever you use to write stories. But don't you DARE come back to my account with your PATHETIC and SICKENING behaviour. I thought my other personally rude reviewers were bad but you take the cake! Stay out of my account if this is your attitude or i'll ban you from it myself.
I'm not even going to review your story. After the shit you wrote in my review box, you aren't even wort it.
P.S.- Before you complain that i spammed your box, what you left me wasn't a review since you only left me some rude words from your twisted handicapped idiotic mind. You never explained what was wrong with my story and i'm not even going to look at yours.
I don't know if yors stories suck, but one thing is for certain. YOU DO! BITCH!