that was heartbreaking. i have not read something that emotional in so long. thank you so much for the pleasure of your story.

Hey, this one shot is great! i really felt that was how char would react, and felt his heartbreak keenly. you decribed it so well!

wow. it made me cry. you could have showed Char with a little more self-control, altough I understand what you were trying to communicate in your writing.

Aw, poor Char! Very good job!

wow. i really felt the emotional pain. i feel so bad for char. *sobs* luv it!

That was absolutely wrenching. The only thing that makes it bearable is that we all know the way it turned out. What a wonderfully well-written story. Thank you so much for writing it.

This was WONDEFUL — so good, it was truly heartbreaking. You write beautifully, with such wonderful description and dialogue that I forget I am reading. I loved it!

Beautiful. I never thought of the way Char must have reacted; you captured it well.

honestly...i luvd it!

aw! poor poor char!
you wrote this SO well!
ok, im going to read the next one know...

Sugar Thief, your comprehension of Char is unbelievable. A better Ella Enchanted fic is no where to be found. Kudos!

-Colette

Perfecto! Your work sounds so much like the real thing.

Very well done! I'm going to read your other things now. Do you write original fiction? I'd like to see that, too.

Poor Char. I love this. I can't wait to read the next two.

Oh! That was sad! Okay...I need to go read Ella Enchanted now! lol!