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Skittles n' Sparky 2005-02-26 ch 1,	abuseHere's a boost for an unhappy, uninspired little authoress! I loved it and it was beautifully written! ~S&S~
Judin 2005-01-13 ch 1,	abuseApplause for the orignial pairing. Awsome! Another emotional story, with a descriptive style that makes the reader long to see all the things you see.
Urei Sachi 2004-12-13 ch 1,	abuseWow. That just made me want to ready Beyblade fics all over again (considering that the section is now polluted...). Seriously, though. Damn, you wrote that piece well. I'm disappointed that there isn't a continuation. Although I'm not a big fan of Tala/Johnny, I'm in love with this fic. BTW, I only figured out it was Tala/Johnny after... what? Five re-reads? =)
iloverayiloverayiloveray 2004-01-20 ch 1, anon.	abusethat was crap i think u need mre of ray or rei in it and make him go out with a girl called alex
tehMimo 2004-01-09 ch 1,	abusesmiles Hey, I've read the reviews, XD I noticed you got some flames. They're so immature, this fic obviously said it was Tala/Johnny and they still read it. hugs Anyway, this was REALLY beauitfully written! You're doing great!
russle 2004-01-01 ch 1, anon.	abusethat was cool i really got a feel for what was goin on,you said you were unhappy so : dont be unhappy there is more to life that thinkin your story suks cos believe me ive read some stories that really suck and this was not one of them you also said you were uninspired : i dont blam you cos after that chapter id be hard pressed to come up with anything else,but here we go ill give you an idea if ya want: really confuse the readers,by after doing that chapter dont do and of the same stuff change tack and do a 'normal1 chapter,then for the next chapter dop the same thing as the first,and just keep on going back a forth,it so crazy it might just work well there you are c u on the other side bi russle
RainOwl 2003-11-04 ch 1,	abusehmm... this is cool. only problum is that in the show tala had no clue johnny egsisted. pob'ly the other way 'round too. but,other than that its cool. Owl
destiny 2003-10-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow.
destiny 2003-10-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow.
destiny 2003-10-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow.
Draconicality 2003-10-24 ch 1,	abusegapes Jorntil: reaches over and clamps Drac's mouth shut Mph! pries her muse off Muhahaha! A new Tala/Johnny! FWE! glomps authoress I wuv you! I was actually checking back again and again to see if you'd post it =3 It's beautiful. A little confusing, since we have little background for the scene you laid out, but the spontaneity of the piece just grabs you. And you've just GOTTA feel sorry for cyborg-boi sniffs On a note - you were right. I need to start the next chapter of Return and have some Enrique and Oliver non-bed-centered action - they've been angsting forever ^^; I am no good at holding a plotline for more than three chapters or so, since I have a habit of dragging things out too much. Well, that concludes my...basically useless...review. I'll do my best to come up with a Johnny/Tala that can compare to this! ~_^ Ja matta ne!
Silvery 2003-10-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really don't mind Yaoi. Put into the proper plot it's quite good. Your story is VERY good.
Lin McGregor 2003-10-22 ch 1,	abuseAw... so sad... sniffles Poor Tala-kun... but it's really good written and the story itself is totally super! PLease write more fics!
Sakura-Hiwatari 2003-10-22 ch 1,	abuseWtf? Iam confused...huh? RED+RED= WRONG! I hate yaoi anywayz...but yea..yours not bad but BAD pairing...hope you'll try another one instead...
CC Queen Of Death 2003-10-22 ch 1,	abuseomg this fic is sick, im sorry but i hate yaoi, and tala and johnny together so i say THIS FIC SUCKS MAJOR ! u have good writing skills, but use them for PROPER writing. eg MALE/FEMALE! and if u cant take this small flamer OFF! everyone gets flamers and your no exception, and then u can act all immature and flame me, even if u think my fic is good, but then if u do that, you'll lose. ok! im sorry but NO YAOI!

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