Reviews for Beyond What Came Before

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potterandpaws4ever 2008-04-22 ch 35,	abuseI am absolutely speechless. This is the absolute best fanfiction i have ever read so far, even comparable to J.K Rowling's work. WOW. The last four chapters were very, very good. Especially the part about leaving Hogwarts, it makes me think, and feel sad too. Thats really good, to be able to make the reader feel something! THANKS ALOT!
Kagome093 2008-03-22 ch 10,	abuseaw thats so cute!
Kagome093 2008-03-22 ch 4,	abuseum hey i dont know if you still read these reviews 5 year later but i have to ask cause this is driving me insane! ok its mostly about the timeline. it says you finished this fic at the end of 2003 the year the prisoner of azkaban came out. in the fic you keep mentioning how seeing remus hurts harry because it reminds him of sirius. so back then you couldnt have known that he was gonna die 2 years later. i can imagine that you can guess after the second book that ginny and harry would end up together and maybe even ron and hermione but how in the world did you know sirius was gonna die?!?!?!
sadi 2007-10-26 ch 35, anon.	abuseIn a couple of weeks , i have twice read your fantastic fic. First of all , your writing is astonishing. All the emotions , the anxiety , Ron's feelings , the plot are simply great great great! Ron is a marvellous character , you do him justice in every chapter. Both his and Hermione's characterization are perfect. I love how their relationship develops slowly , each step meaningful , the tension growing... You offer us hours of delightful reading here. All i have dreamed of ( Ron and Hermione finally together , Ron becoming more mature ,showing his sweetness, seeing the two of them as a loving couple ) is here , is written by you! No betrayal . I love how Malfoy only brings them closer in the end. Their first kiss , his devotion to her ( what a wonderful boyfriend he is!), their first time... It couldn't be better , it's awesome.
xox-emily-xox 2007-10-06 ch 35,	abuseOMG! I LOVED IT! AH! AMAZINGLY WRITTEN! :D
Mione-Girl.x 2007-07-02 ch 35,	abuseokay i know you written this a long time ago but i was looking at stories and i saw this one and started to read it and coul'd take my eyes off of it lol x anyway its a great story and its very detailed i can picture most of the scenes you described in my head your a great writer x keep it up for the future x Love Mione-Girl.x
winkwinknudgenudge25 2007-01-14 ch 35,	abusebeautiful. perfect. amazing. breathtaking. pure. wonderful. gorgeous. absolutely beautiful. i just read like the whole entire thing. and i think my mom is scared because ive been sitting at the computer for so long. :] i absolutely lobed it. beautifil ~winkwink
knightsbridge 2006-06-05 ch 18,	abuseGreat story. Not that I don't like JKR, but you have teenagres down to a science. Teens DO swear. a lot, as a matter of fact, and there was one scene in particular in POA that I thought she got all wrong: The reurn trip on the train, when Pig made his first appearance with the letter from Sirius, and Hermiony and Ron both said "Read it aloud." Hermiony, maybe...but that's just something Ron would never say. "Tell us what is says", but Read it aloud is so stiff and English Teacherish. I started to re-read the books before GOF (a right horrible movie...too much left out) and found that I enjoy GOOD ff like yours more than the books. lol, now I'm on everyones hit list! No one bashes JKR and lives to tell the tale.
savePLUTOscrewURANUS 2006-06-03 ch 35,	abuseAwesome. Loved it. Adding to favorites. =)
fantasyBEAST 2006-06-01 ch 35, anon.	abuseWow. This is, quite simply, a fabulous fan fiction. Quite frankly, if you were to come up with your own characters, maybe genies instead of wizards, or something like that, you could sell this as a real book and make a ton of money. You are a fantastic writer, and I wish you well. xoxo.
broken.wings. 2006-05-17 ch 35, anon.	abuseLove it! It's the first R/Hr I've read in a while and it was awesome...I love your characterization of Malfoy in particular. I always feel like his characterization is different with every author and no one really hits him right on the head the way that Rowling intended him to be, but you came as close as I've seen it. I also love how you built the relationships..they seem so natural. I just wanted to say that I loved your story and I look forward to reading Aftermath...
rahlgreens 2006-05-14 ch 35,	abuseI LOVE YOUR STORY!
Born-Slippy 2006-04-17 ch 5,	abuseWoa, why the hell you gotta be so the creevey's ffs. What did they actually do wrong; Colin zilch, Dennis accidently hitting Ginny with a bludger, no need cast them in such a bad light. Dennis even admitted it which takes a hell of a lot of courage. They were playing sports, accidents happen, I broke my leg playing football (soccer to Americans), i never once unreasonably lashed out at the guy who did it, i simply accepted it as part of the sport. it was an accident simple as and he apologised. Mcgonagal claiming "negligence" is also entirely OC of a wizarding community with quote "numerous deaths over the years from playing quidditch" (JKR). Harry saw the last bludger being hit after the end of practice was called so why didnt Ginny unless she wasnt paying attention, thus she at least shares some of the blame. The fact that youve used two honest and nice (if a bit annoying admittedly) characters to further the whole H/G relationship has seriously me off and thus i wont be reading anymore of what was otherwise quite a promising story.
Naira 2005-12-02 ch 35, anon.	abuseMan, I was impressed with this story; it was my first complete Ron + Hermione fic and I loved it; it was beautiful, well-developed, completely iN character and...wel, perfect. Thank you for this.
Nibs 2005-10-15 ch 35, anon.	abuseOMG. That was such a good fanfiction! I cried at the end! I really love it and can't wait to get started on Aftermath! I would also like to congratulate you for pulling off an excellent Ron/Hermione/Draco triangle! And if your willing, maybe you could give it another shot, but have it end Draco/Hermione? There arent many good Draco/Hermione authors out there right now (especially ones who throw in Ron correctly) and it would be grand to have you give it a shot! Thanks again for 6 hours well spent sitting in front of my computer! Consider it, and until next time, Adios!

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