Ron scratched his nose. “Well,” he said, “I thought that went rather well.”

HAHAHA

hehehe this is TOO FUNNY I loove it.I hope you update soon I really do.

I absolutly adore your work!

youre not following canon very well. Harry isnt so perfect, thats one of the reasons why we love him.

I didn't even realize there was a side piece to one of my favorite fics, "The Human Condition" until I got the alert in my inbox. Glad I got it too - this is quite enjoyable. Had me laughing out loud a few times too. But you did a great job illustraing how much a Gryffindor Harry is the way he'd keep trudging ahead through every false start he had with Piper.

This is great. I'm looking forward to the next part.

Hi,
This review is for The Human Condition. I feel too lazy to go to that story. I think you have a fabulous writing style but I didn't like Harry's wife being the evil one. How much can a guy take? One can take Voldemort being evil but having your love turn evil. I will say you were too cruel to Harry. All the psycology stuff sometimes just becmes too much as well. I can't understand why you changed Harry from good guy to such an irritating guy. That's what we all love about Harry. the ability to be nice however bad the circumstances. But I think you missed out one point. No one asked how the prosecuters were able to know about Harry's abilities when no one else did. Only Harry and his wife knew about that. It became easy to guess that she was the villain then. Harry and Hermione must be stupid not to figure it out.
The Marauder Chronicles revisited was true to canon though. I really liked it.

Now, it's very rare that I review a chapter before finishing all written chapters for that given story, but how could I not after a chapter like that?

At first I was worried this would be a far-to-arrogant-Harry story, but I don't think I've seen a better example of the phrase 'put your money where your mouth is'.

Excellent scene here. I love Harry in this bit - and a bit awed, just like the rest of his 'audience' here. Great job on this - I'm off to read the next chapters!

Excellent story!

Aw, I liked it. I love Hermione and Harry. Piper, I kinda dislike, but that's ok.

I really enjoyed it, I miss reading your fics!

what the hell? This is good and all, but this chapter isn't anything like the first three. From the HC and MC I never pegged you as the kind of person to randomly have harry start having sex with some chick he just met. The style seems differnt to. Hm. It's good though.

It's been so long since you updated this story. I really like it. That was mean of Piper to make Hermione all jealous like that and I liked the fight between Harry and Hermione at the end. I reckon that's exactly how they'd act if JK write it. Please update soon I'm really enjoying this story!

Oh yeah, and in chapter 3 I think, I noticed many things wrong with this sentence.

“So,

Hey, this is a nice story. I like Piper's character but ever since the whole Audrey ordeal, I'm not sure whether I trust any girl that likes Harry. Funny chapter, though. I look forward to reading a lot of this once the final chapter of THC is done. :) Oh, and this is after Hogwarts, a year or two, but how long is it before THC starts?

PLEASE UPDATE!

hm now that Harry got his "super-powers" back, can you make them go back to the pub. And get harry beat the crap out of the guy who busted him a few months ago?