is miller in this story? idk why but him and murphy are the only ones i kno of

Wow! Very well done. A lot of thought went into these and it shows. I love the fact that you really capture the characters and the small details! On a side note, so glad that you had Doris with red hair. When they changed actresses that last season and made her a blonde with a cimpletely different personality, I found it hard to swallow, but here we see good old Doris (I was picturing Janet Carol). Would love to see more of your work, love the motown refeerences. Now, thats good fan fic!

I know you already know that I LOVE this story, but I'm going to say it again anyway, hehe. You've captured all the FYIers perfectly! Can't wait to read the other 2 parts!

This is really amazing. It feels like Murphy is back. It's so true to all the characters and it has all the MB wit and humor that we love. I recommend everyone who likes MB to read this, it makes you feel like you've gonne back in time. Loved it!