Hi
I just read your story it was very good.

Aw that's so sweet, and sad :( But it was a great chapter. I'm so happy you finished this one!! Hope you'll write more soon :)

Great ending!! :D
I hope you're wroking on your next story!! :D

It needs one more chapter, ofcourse! *lol*
I can almost see Lyle in that wheelchair, it's funny and kinda cute too :) Great chapter! Glad that Parker will be okay!

Enjoyed your story very much. Loved seeing the reign of terror from Raines and Willie put to an end. I'm a sucker for happy endings and would like to see one more chapter just to put some closure between the main characters, i.e., Jarod and Syd as well as the handcuffed "three Musketeers" hee hee.

dEFINENTLY needs one more chapter...or two...please

Hi
Just read your story. I think it needs one more chapter to.

That is so not an ending! :D I need a real ending, a snapping Parker, Lyle well, being Lyle, lol and just a kinda happy ending!! :D:D:D

Oh no! Don't let Miss Parker die! She is my favorite character. But I do like how you made the twist with Jarod thinking Lyle was going to kill him. Awaiting the next chapter:)

Great chapter!! Event though it was a happening a little fast, I love it that Lyle shot himself and that he shot the cuffs off, but he shot the cuffs off without hurting anyone between him and Jarod, so why did he have to shoot himself to get rid of the cufss between him and parker?? :D just a little thing I found there!! :D Great end to Raines!! :D

Yeah!Thank you for updating! Awaiting the next chapter to see who got shot. I do have to say this is a surreal world, because Parker and Jarod are acting differently to Lyle and Lyle is different, too. But thats okay. Is Lou a character you made up, or is Lou someone who actually showed up in the series? Just curious.

Great chapter! At least Syd's real family is with him now!! I hope your trio get's out of there fast! Without loosing on of them, whoever got shot! Good thing Jarod helped so many people that this guy could help them!! Can't wait to read more!! ThX for writing only for us 3 :D

Wow so now you have to update real soon, who got shot?! I wanna know! Great chapter by the way :)
Cya!

Great update! Here's review number four (a little too late I see, but hey, better late than never!) Now I'm gonna read chapter six! Hope you didn't kill Syd... :)

Raines - world domination!! Wow, I hope that the three do get free and can somehow stop him. I am certainly wondering who got shot. I am also concerned about Sydney - I hope that he makes it and has not been harmed. Sorry for Lou dying: it was probably a ploy by Raines so the three would be easy prey. Please post again soon. We need answers. Good work!