Very interesting story. :)

And I like the concept, too. I hope you can create a sequel eventually, maybe start covering the events of the shows with Naga taking Gourry's place, and including some Lina/Naga action?

Of course, I know this fic is over TEN YEARS OLD, so a sequel isn't all that likely. But, still, I'd like to see your idea pan out. :D

Later! :D

Alexander "Alex" Yamato

Azure Knight of the Raging Tempest

:-).

This fic is a gem among garbage.

This is a great story. i read it a while ago but i had to come back and reveiw, because i still think of it and wonder what happened next. I approve when ff writers give flat characters some depth. it would be great if you wrote a sequel, but it's not likely, so i won't push.

Al

Wonderful fic. Kept me sitting in front of my computer until I had it all read. (When I should have been sleeping. XD) Lina/Naga is good, and there definitely isn't enough of it.

I have always liked Naga, but this fic made me think of her even more deeply.

I may have to get into Slayers more now, because of you...

Great fic!

Shane :)

I agree with the other reviewers and I think another Lina/Naga (my favorite characters) fiction would be great. The story was great even if it has not come out the way you desired. Keep working.

I saw this thing about Nagas royalty at this site w.inverse.org

Sorry for my english, I am Brasilian, so I speak portuguese.

That was really good. I like the character devolpment. You really gave Naga a personality (more of a past)... Since she doesn't really have that much of a history from what most of us know, you giving her one was great! I think you should do a sequal... I need to read more of your stories! I need some more great reading material!

Sayonara. Junko-kun. Yes I rant. But at least I give useful information!

four reviews? damnit it deserves SO much more than that. this was a terrific fic, i think u should write a sequal, now excuse me while i check out your other stories. .

I luved this fic!

emotional, exciting and engrossing!

and I really liked the subtle hints of f/f !

naga and lina are one of my fav yuri couples in anime! keep writing!

Good fic. Semi-serious, with just enough slayersy bits to keep it in character. Where does the whole Naga comes from Sailune theory come from anyway?

Holy Crap is that long. And it's good too, considering I don't even like Naga, but this story is pretty good.

I got to read this before it got posted here, and let me tell you, this was good stuff! Then again, Sean usually does that _.