Reviews for In the Beginning
tsukuyomi.sakurachi 1/1/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Whoa! Only you could explain the passage of the Bible like that and make it into a fanfict about Tomoyo and Eriol! Keep up! And God bless!

P.S. I think that Tomoyo is a bit OOC!*whisper* Because Tomoyo is supposed to be witty and cunning. Not a shy girl. *whisper*
Guest 6/7/11 . chapter 1
what a cute couple it is. I miss your oneshots. Who-knows how many times I reread your stories.
Tommy-yomz 3/20/11 . chapter 1
This is my favorite story so far.
hikarihayashi-chan 3/9/10 . chapter 1
so kawaii :D

i like the way you describe the bible story :L:L
Kawaiiigirl 2/19/10 . chapter 1
OH MY ERIOL!

THAT IS SO KAWAI!

WHOA. 68 REVIEWS FOR ONE CHAPTER?

I loovee this little ficcie! Ae! You're a fantastic author, syoaran no hime!

Aw, Sakura and Syoaran's kid is so cute. The name you used was great, too! Nadeshiko...taken from Sakura's mom.

And I just simply adored you because instead of making Tomoyo such an emo person, you just made her so kawaii and blush everytime Eriol looks at her.

And Eriol...my, my...he was simply a god in this story!

I love this! love it, love it, love it!

Oh, how you made The Creation relevant to love, it was simply great!

Ahhw. you should write more TxE. They're so adorable. Hehe.

Please write more.

Love your writing forever!

Kawaigirl!
SerenitySoldier97 11/1/09 . chapter 1
This was amazing :D
break.my.soul 4/19/09 . chapter 1
wootch.!

LOL

that was amazing...
144829 1/18/09 . chapter 1
“What a cute couple they make,” He said.

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AND I AGREE! Hahahahahahahaha. Your stories make me so happy, it's almost a crime. LOL!
AmeOfTheNight 7/8/08 . chapter 1
This is such a cute story! I really like it!
nightlynxness 5/30/08 . chapter 1
LOL. Real funny
The Patchwork Bear 4/28/08 . chapter 1
that ending... i'll neva forget it
winterkaguya 4/14/08 . chapter 1
aw...this is so cute! i also love how eriol interpret the passage! i never thought it'd be that way too! but knowing God, He works in mysterious ways! hahahaha...

and i do wonder, why'd it take eriol this freaking long to court tomoyo? oh man...

anyways, nice job!
theInfamousNeedle 11/17/07 . chapter 1
nice! I like the last part “What a cute couple they make,” He said. yup, that part
Agnes Green 9/6/07 . chapter 1
you have a real knack for all this fluffy cuteness

i really enjoyed that. especially the interpritation.

where did you get that from?
woofyy 7/14/06 . chapter 1
aww! it's sweet! hahaha! welps good luckies with ur future stories! XD
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