| Reviews for In the Beginning |
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not applicable 10/23/03 . chapter 1This is really great! Wai, wai! And Nadeshiko is so cute. That fic was really sweet. Sorry I can drop a long review, but I got to go! Bye! |
julyeighth 10/22/03 . chapter 1That's really kawaii! That was great! *pokes* LOL.. it would be interesting to see the afterface of this though... |
Star Katt 10/22/03 . chapter 1That was so kawaii! How cute! - I luv E T stories. Keep up the good work. l8r g8r |
Guest 10/22/03 . chapter 1 Kawaii. |
Anime-mistress585 10/22/03 . chapter 1NO! I'm the 7th reviewer! NO *makes mental note* check email more often...try every 10 minutes...*sighs* IT SO CUTE! E T Syaoran no Hime idead AWESOME FIC! (don'cha luv my scientific equation! *adjusts big glasses trying to look smart*) KEEP IT UP! *blinks and eyes widen* That what i was trying NOT to say...its ...corny! Sappy! Chesey! Unlike your wonderful ficcy! One of my favorite couples! *grins and begins begging* more stories! please! If i beg hard enough will you? PLEASE Ja ne BUH BYE |
bunnyluvrchan 10/22/03 . chapter 1This is really good! I just saw one eensy mistake: pinning is like pinning someone to the ground. I this "pining" is the word you're looking for, with only one "n." It might've been a typo, but little things like that bug me, and I'm all for ridding the world of grammar and spelling errors. The story is refreshingly unique- I love the Bible relevance. |
KyteAura 10/22/03 . chapter 1Ka-wa-ii...Almost as sweet as the hot chocolate I just gulped down...Too bad I added like 5 packs of sugar O.o |
Lttlwings 10/22/03 . chapter 1“Listen, Nadeshiko. God didn’t get the woman from a man’s foot because a woman is not meant to be stepped on. He didn’t get her from the man’s back either, because she is not meant to be a burden.” Eriol got up and suddenly took Tomoyo’s hands and placed them on her chest. “He took her from here- under his arm so she could be protected by a man’s strong arms, and near his heart where she would rule him.” This sentence was the most beautiful thing I ever read! If any man said that to me I would fall into his arms and kiss him right away! Those are such beautiful words! I would like to say that I luv, adore all of u'r ET fics! They are my fav CCS couple, and to knwo that u write about them makes me glad! Not onyl are the plot amazingly well written, but everything is so enjoyable to read! I must say that I am glad to have encountered u'r fics! Plz continue on with the amazing job |
VanillaMoose4132 10/22/03 . chapter 1AWE! Too KAWAII! but that was soo sweet! write more stories like that! |
flitter bug 10/22/03 . chapter 1aww..cute one shot! great job! ] |
Carmela-chan 10/22/03 . chapter 1Very Kawaii! _ So sweet. Nice ET one shot. Great job! Ja ne! *.::Carmela-chan::.* |
LighthawkKnight 10/22/03 . chapter 1hehe... cute. Wow I never thought about Adam and Eve that way... nice! |
midnight blue 10/22/03 . chapter 1 kawaii fic. keep up the good work. just one question. are you a christian or something? you know awful lot about the bible and all. anyway, good job on the writing and everything. |