Reviews for His Brother's Pup

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Moonlite Knight 2008-07-17 ch 9,	abuseThis is an amazing story! It's extremely well written, and simply amazing! More than once I started to cry when reading this. I really hope that you continue someday!
akilana 2008-07-04 ch 9,	abuseI demand an update it;s been like 7 - 8 months . Update now
puts foot in mouth 2008-06-14 ch 9,	abuseThis story makes me sad and I came close to tears reading/experiencing of Sesshoumaru's pain. The story is excellently written, but more than that it is affecting and painful - which can only be a testament to your skill as a writer.
shifter-youkai 2008-06-06 ch 9,	abuseI really like this story =D you have GOT to update x3
SpringFlower 2008-05-20 ch 9,	abusepokes Are you still alive? Well, anyways, I know you're busy and all, and I totally respect that. Update the story any time you want. Just know that avid fans are waiting for an update, and every day that you don't give us one a part of our soul dies. I would just like to say that this story has to be one of the best stories I have read on this entire site. And believe me, I've spent hours on this site (because I have absolutely no life =D). I've been in so many different fandoms, so many different stories, and have been in so many different genres. And your story just blows anything else out of the water. I'd like to point out that you are able to amazingly portray Prince Sesshoumaru's feelings in this fic. Whenever I thought of Sesshoumaru before this, I always thought that he must have felt a little lonely or sad while his father was off with Izayoi. I never saw anyone else really put such sadness and loneliness in a story as well as you have, or have showed his emotions so well. I think that you are able to really bring up some valid thoughts in here. I mean, I can totally see where Sesshoumaru is coming from when he pushes Izayoi away. Obviously, she's a human, and those kind of people killed his mother. Not only that, but he believes them weak and inferior. And he probably feels as if she's trying to take his mother's place, which is kinda what she's trying to do. So it's only natural for him to push her away. But then, I also see Izayoi's side of the story, too. I mean, here she is, in a pretty foreign environment - youkai everywhere, a new home, and a son of the man she loves that she never end heard about! She must be slightly confused as well, and unsure of what to do. She also must be anxious to prove herself to be worthy of being Inutaisho's wife, and she wants to connect with Sesshoumaru too. And then you bring up the father/son action so well, too. Again, I can see both sides beautifully. Sesshoumaru, hurt and confused as to why his father is pushing him away. He's neglected, and abused, and he's still mourning for his mother. In this view, his father is a total jackass. However, when you view it from Inutaisho's viewpoint... he probably sees Sesshoumaru as a reminder of the mistake he made of not coming to his former wife's aid. He lashes out at Sesshoumaru because he DOES constantly remind him of his mistakes. And then he also lashes out because everything is breaking apart around him - his empire is falling apart because of his relations with the human woman, and he has a hanyou, too. So you portray everything SO well. I was able to get all of that from your story. I also love the Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha interaction. Just seeing Inuyasha with Sesshoumaru... it's almost like Inuyasha is slowly healing Sesshoumaru. And Sesshoumaru is being so awesome, too, when he comes to Inuyasha's defense. In this latest chapter, I can't help but wonder what the next chapter will bring. Will Inutaisho walk in on the two sleeping together? If so, what will his reaction be? Will Inutaisho not walk in on them, but instead see Inuyasha still hurt from Tsukoyoko the next day, and smell Sesshoumaru on him? If so, will he freak out and hurt Sesshoumaru? Or will nothing happen? Or, even more exciting, will it be something between Sesshoumaru and Tsukoyoko, and how that guy deals with Sesshoumaru in training? Will Tsukoyoko go after Inuyasha again, and will Sesshoumaru hold to his threat? So many questions, and no chapter yet. I can only hope that you do update sometime. Again, this is an amazing story, and I really hope that you continue on writing it. Thanks for writing! ~SpringFlower
wolfgirl16 2008-04-27 ch 9,	abuseBest. Story. EVER! :D Update soon!
Dayxxdreamer 2008-04-25 ch 9,	abuseGosh, I'm in love with your story, I absolutely sure it's one of the best Inuyasha stories I've ever read. You're a great writer, so please continue on and update soon.
The Black Flame Phoenix 2008-04-23 ch 9,	abuseplease update soon i really like this story.
Theblackangels 2008-04-10 ch 9,	abuseaw. sessh does have a heart1 i bet he would have looked really cute. though even when he's lil. he's still dangerous. but seriously, wat did u expect from the prince of the west? why dont they have acid resistant locks? (not that it would help... much..) i hope u update soon. it sounds like a great story. i hope u write more. its very intresting. Well, bye. ~TBA~
MooMoo-of-Doom 2008-04-10 ch 9,	abuseThis story always wants to make me cry! PLEASE update! Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please!
iShiznitch 2008-03-27 ch 9,	abuseIt's funny, I always find a way into your stories, through random realms I never, EVER thought I'd be in. And every time I LOVE them. Your writing technique, your plot, your story... but most of all, your characterizations. This whole tale? Wow. The Father son dynamics are... amazing. So all in all: sgldvdlgmvljmesfdx. BV
DemonChild of the Dark 2008-03-24 ch 9,	abuseOh, this is so god! PLEASE CONTINUE! I love it. It's a whole new side of Sesshy! Oh, and I'm just saying, when Sesshy's all sad about his real mother dying, the lyrics of the the song "Haunted" by Kelly Clarkson (i was listening to it while reading this) jumped out at me a fit him perfectly for this story. Just think you should listen to the song on Youtube. Oh, and PLEASE CONTINUE! ~Houko
setsuko teshiba 2008-03-21 ch 9,	abusei love it! plz update soon!
Seishuku Arashi 2008-03-20 ch 9,	abuseThis is cute but sad =]
axel138 2008-03-01 ch 9,	abuseaw! please update soon! i cant take it anymore, im going crazy just thinking about the next chapter!! xDD ive read your story about five times already... (i knowz im crazy @.@) so plz update soon! my very sanity rests on this story's completion!!

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