I think you need improvement in the following...oh screw it. I hated this. This made Cramp Twins look good. You made Manny seem even worse then she already is. You killed my favorite episode Gangsta Gangsta. Know whats sad? I never even saw Gangsta Gangsta. I'm sorry but don't ever write again for the sake of the children. Oh and another thing, there were no feelings in this at all!

P.S. You made everyone in Degrassi look bad. When you said, 'Marco, gay as can be,' I took offense. Being gay doesn't matter and you could have said, 'Marco, unique as can be.'

Too harsh? Too bad. It's constructive criticism. And one more thing. These poems are like Rice Crispies without sugar. They suck.

plz, plz,plz, plz,plz,plz! write 4 season 4! i like this stuff.

You have definetly improved good job!

hey i read all the poems and *dont worry they were all great* i found out there r nopoems about Liberty! except the all 1 i just wanted to let u knoe

i really liked it was really awesome i think u got their personalities al th way

I dont want to discourage you in poetry but...those poems really sucked. but that is only my opinion.

Er...yay? What is that!? Is that supposed be poetry...*gag*

You forgot the episode "Our House."

All these people are telling you you get the point across and do you know why? Because you are telling a story. These aren't poems and I am feeling the lack of improvement.
The world of poetry is still foreign to you and frankly ignorance is not bliss. Stop, drop the pen and do some actual creative thought.
Play around with the words. It doesn't need to be a sentence. Instead of saying "He hid is sadness". Say "Veiled in a cloak of fractured happiness."
See, the poetry in that. Now run along and try something atleast decent.

Sorry, i hated those... But try to make them better poems, not stories. That's just my opinion... Sorry i had to reply negatively.

Hey friend. It's me sistercuz so I read the latest entries. You got the point across. I haven't exactly seen the episodes myself but I know what you are sayin'. My advice is to use more rhyming or have some kind of pattern and that will help it flow better. You get what I'm sayin? I hope I helped. They're good but I know you could make them better. Email me! Update Please!

there not really poems. Therer mostly like somekind of diaries. It would be better if you actually put the peoples feelings instead of what you see on t.v. because a good poet doesn't have to go through that pain to make a good poem about it. it's ok though (i guess)

you don't do the poetic world justice

I know i have said it once but i will say it again Show don't Tell. You have these poems and then you just end them with a nice little concluding line. The reader gets it, they don't need a little line at the end to tell them want you meant cause we are not stupid and we get that Craig can't chose or that Ashley feels betrayed. Give your reader some credit. You are getting better and i know with a little work it will all come into place but you need to think a little more outside of the box. Make me think and make me go wow when i finally get it.

Good poems!