I wish you had been able to finish this. Robin's Rival was probably the only ever Starfire/Robin fic I'd ever read, so I'm very sorry it's been sitting incomplete like this. And I'm sorry I was too introverted as a kid to handle the stuff going on in my life without lashing out at everyone around me.

Hopefully by that statement you know who this is and I hope that you read this. I feel awful about how things ended. I sent you an email once upon a time but idk if you ever read that or saw it.

I hope you're still a conceited, talented, braggard. I hope you're the best at where you are, just like you should be. Yes, I actually do genuinely wish you the best, regardless of what you think--I always have. I just wish you had slapped me across the face and asked me why the hell I was acting so stupidly back then, though because you would have been a great friend to keep, Laura. You're irreplaceable & I'll always be envious of you so keep it that way.

I really hope that one day I can apologize in person rather than through emails and reviews I doubt you'll ever read.

this is a very good story. justthe perfect balance of action and romance.

hey when the heck are you posting the next chapter, huh? it's been like, 80 months. PLEASE HURRY UP!

More fluff! Add fluff! Personally, i hate Terra, i love ur story, so please. Poor Raven is biting at the bit! Get them together (Raven and BB). Anywho, I love ur story more than anything and more fluff with Starfire and Robin (I love the fluff u make with them!). Keep writing! I check to see if you posted chapter .20 every morning!!

I
LOVE
YOUR
STORY. Write cheesier stuff,and maybe a suprise with Starfire/Robin *hint new person hint*. Anywho, i love ur work and i think the love triangle of BB, Raven and Terra is just splendid. (terra freaks me out tho). Oh, and believe me, the fluffier the better! I like romance, and i bet others will 2! So write chapter 20 quickly so i can read it and tell everyone and CNN al about your wonderfulwonderful work!

wowie
great story

hey it's really good plz update soon. i need to read more.
update update update!

Hey! I love ur story but can u review any time soon! Not to be rude but IT'S BEEN ALMOST A YEAR! When I like something and i have to wait a long time i get upset so can u please update soon?

please update soon! i love this story. all i have done all day is read this story, well, the only productive thing, besides school

you did a sweet job you go girl(or boy).I was wondering are you going to make more chaps?I want to hear a little more about Deathfire and what his plans are to kill Robin.If Star is going to leave, if B.B is ever going to realize that Raven is feeling him or will Terra stop him from seeing that.If B.B will believe Ravens dreams or visions she has been seeing.(p.s stay cool, keep with the sweet chaps peace out a town.

your story is so awwesome Im going to be writing a story soon look for misunderstoodgrl

I absolutely LOVE your Fic! You must update soon! It's incredible, and I can't wait to find out what happens next chapter! Hurry and update, because I bite if you don't! ^^

~Riles

This was a great chapter, as always. I look forward to reading more, so please update ASAP!

Whoa! It's been a long time since ya updated. Though, I haven't reviewed in a while...I thinx...o.O;;...aw, who cares. Yah, Raven, go kick Terra's fricken -bleep- hole(i'm not allowed to cuss online...meh)! Yes, I'm an Anti-Terra and a BBxRaven shipper. More fluff on the coupling, ya'll!! ^^

If you fix your spelling, and keep the story in past tense, opposed to having it switch from past to present tense, your story will be much better. On the plus side you have a strong plot and good description.