Nice. Thanks, Beth Palladino

This was a really cool story, even though I'm not a Jack fan. Please keep writing!

that was excellent. i love the big brother jack. keep it up

Nice story,...I suffer from the same syndrom too...although i have yet to show it in my stories i'm workin on

Awesome story! Do you have something against Jack? :) that's ok though cause I love suspense. Keep it up!

What a great story. I really wish Jack was still on the show. Please write more.

Very good story! I'll pass it on to some of my other DM friends!

Good... creative... keep writing! I'm a huge fan of Jack/Amanda romance... and I like Jesse too so it's great when they can all be in a story together.