Perfect.

I love you.

V. good. I really like it!

I feel so utterly stupid now, but what was it he offered? And what was the sentence behind "If I (...) I don't"? Sorry. :-(

Lovely story. I loved the 'second time' when you can tell that Sirus and Remus don't trust each other yet they're trying to pretend they still do...le sigh. I also loved the end, it had a sort of Robin Hobb feel, it made me pang for the wolf in her books, Nighteyes *sniffle* and then the running with the wolf in the end dream--

Anyway, point is I liked it, lol.

This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read in my life, in any genre. You've captured the characters PERFECTLY, and it's just so, so beautiful. I can't wait to read more!!

i liked that story. some sort of underlying meaning to it that needs to be analyzed. kind of like a home feeling. very good.

Maybe in another life
I could find you there
Pulled away before your time
I can't deal, it's so unfair

And it feels, and if feels like
Heaven is so far away
And it feels, and it feels like
The world has grown cold
Now that you've gone away

Leaving flowers on your grave
To show that I still care
Black roses and Hail Mary's
Can't bring back what's taken from me

I reach to the sky
And call out your name
And if I could trade, I would

And it feels, and it feels like
Heaven is so far away
And it stings, yeah it stings now
The world is so cold now that you've gone away

I reach to the sky
And call out your name
Oh please let me trade
I would

And it feels, and it feels like
Heaven is so far away
And it feels, yeah it feels like
The world has grown cold
Now that you've gone away

*_* That was beautiful. I got all emotional at the end. Great job!

- Ember

that was beautiful

I've not read much Harry Potter fanfiction before, but I like your characterization of Remus and Sirius very much. And it does feel... warmer this time around. ^_^ Beautiful, as always.