All your fics are so beautiful and heartfelt... There is always a quiet understated depth to them. Just wonderful! I love your Gojyo and Hakkai voices!

Beautiful. There's something about your writing that just paints the scenes so vividly. I can see the people and the scenery perfectly; sense them, even.

Wee! Nice fic (despite the lack of sex no da)!! Always happy to read some good old Hakkai/Gojyo no da! ^-^
~Nagi

Nice~~

Sweet, with just a dash of vinegar. But who the heck is Li Bai?

excuse this late review yah. i've clicked on this story twice yet i couldnt really digest...until now. not the language but the beauty of this fic. er, am i making sense? anyways, i love it. (mainly bec there's hakkai in here) hehe...ok, i shall stop now. once again, beautiful fic!

I don't know what to say...but I'll try...

This is one of those damn beautiful fics that makes me wanna cry. Seriously. So much poetry, even in the writing itself...this is as close to flawlessness as any fanfic writer could ever wish for. Your fics are just so simple but yet complex in a way that's so out of this world. Wonderful and rich and even though the fic is set in such a humble provinance, an entire world unfolds in it, so loud it's singing.

Beautiful. Something that makes a reader stop their train of thought and just focus on the fic, just for that little memorable while^__~

Ah...that was beautifully wonderfuly adorable! Loved it...you truly are a wonderful writer and despite what you say, you captured Hakkai just fine...m...Hakkai...err sorry, better now...

Especially liked the part when Gojyo grabs him, just so earnest, and okay, so I am an absolute 5/8 fan and that was just glorious...

On a side not...concerning your PS to neechan aka X-parrot...I keep asking the SAME question...I mean for me he sorta is back...if you count those what...TWO lines GRR...but unlike all of you, I've been waiting almost TWO MONTHS for a new part! AH! SOO not fair! She must write more..

And so must you...once...y'know...school settles and all...because your fic is so wonderful and YUM! and you're a wonderfully talented writer...and I think I've rambled way too long, gomen, I tired :-P...but I truly adored this fic!!

Hey, don't diss this, I liked it very much. I particularly liked the line about maybe some day the faces not all being hers. I'm sorry we won't be hearing from you for a while, but I look forward to more stories from you in the future.

full sympathy for the difficulties of writing that bastard Hakkai - but you did a marvelous job of it here. the scene is set so nicely, and the story is so sweet and gentle and as peaceful as those boys deserve. As always your details are superlative - Gojyo forgoing cigarettes to wait up. Aw.

Glad to know I'm not the only one who resorts to quotes & poems scrounged up online for the titles ^^

...when is he coming back? Um...as soon as I...oh my goodness, what is that behind you? *runs away very quickly*

FF.net kindly swallowed my first review for me. But what I wanted to say, is -- great writing, great fic, great imagery.

And great Hakkai ^_^. No, really. He comes across as a bit woolier than he was on the Road West (but domestic life does that to you, I guess ^_^), so he's a bit more like Gonou than Hakkai, but still great, nonetheless.

Pity about the lack of Sanzo, but the fic is beautiful on its own ^_^.

...Now I want Tea Eggs! :O.

(p.s. If you get 6 copies of this review, it's FF.net's fault!)

FF.net kindly swallowed my first review for me. But what I wanted to say, is -- great writing, great fic, great imagery.

And great Hakkai ^_^. No, really. He comes across as a bit woolier than he was on the Road West (but domestic life does that to you, I guess ^_^), so he's a bit more like Gonou than Hakkai, but still great, nonetheless.

Pity about the lack of Sanzo, but the fic is beautiful on its own ^_^.

...Now I want Tea Eggs! :O.

(p.s. If you get 6 copies of this review, it's FF.net's fault!)

FF.net kindly swallowed my first review for me. But what I wanted to say, is -- great writing, great fic, great imagery.

And great Hakkai ^_^. No, really. He comes across as a bit woolier than he was on the Road West (but domestic life does that to you, I guess ^_^), so he's a bit more like Gonou than Hakkai, but still great, nonetheless.

Pity about the lack of Sanzo, but the fic is beautiful on its own ^_^.

...Now I want Tea Eggs! :O.

(p.s. If you get 6 copies of this review, it's FF.net's fault!)

FF.net kindly swallowed my first review for me. But what I wanted to say, is -- great writing, great fic, great imagery.

And great Hakkai ^_^. No, really. He comes across as a bit woolier than he was on the Road West (but domestic life does that to you, I guess ^_^), so he's a bit more like Gonou than Hakkai, but still great, nonetheless.

Pity about the lack of Sanzo, but the fic is beautiful on its own ^_^.

...Now I want Tea Eggs! :O.

FF.net kindly swallowed my first review for me. But what I wanted to say, is -- great writing, great fic, great imagery.

And great Hakkai ^_^. No, really. He comes across as a bit woolier than he was on the Road West (but domestic life does that to you, I guess ^_^), so he's a bit more like Gonou than Hakkai, but still great, nonetheless.

Pity about the lack of Sanzo, but the fic is beautiful on its own ^_^.

...Now I want Tea Eggs! :O.