Reviews for Talk to the Moon

Reviews For: Talk to the Moon

Kill the Whalers 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseYay! Great story!
Aia 2008-05-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseAW! Awesome! So cute!
XAngst-PrincessX 2007-02-09 ch 1,	abuseWell your english is fantastic I must say. And I loved this story. It really shows the friendship the group has. Cool Cool i really loved it :)
Angel Frog 2006-09-15 ch 1,	abuseI like this. It shows a part of Inuyasha that not many touch upon. A lot of people only show Inuyasha as he is on the surface--brash and rude--but there's obviously more to him than that. As for grammar or spelling mistakes, I didn't see anything. And believe me, things like that tend to bug me, so I usually notice.
Tsuna Dragon 2005-09-25 ch 1,	abuseAmazing. Very nicely writen! Keep up the great work!
Sara aka Seras 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseme lovie fic oh i love angst hugs angst i swear other people i meet hate angst but why sure its tear jerking and has dark feelings but once you get used to it the story gets better and you learn to love it anyhoo (shoot me i love that word) great fic
Des 2004-02-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this! Almost shounen-ai...;-; clinguu
Spectrum 2003-10-25 ch 1,	abuseThat was so sweet it's not funny. ^_^ I loved this--it was kind of sentimental in places, but in a good way that made it all the nicer to read. I don't really think it was OOC--episode 52 is pretty much the angstiest in the series, so Inuyasha's allowed to be a little upset. And I can definitely see Miroku coming over to offer some comfort. I think you played it out very nicely. (The part where Inuyasha tried to get Miroku to promise to kill him if it happened again seemed especially fitting, as did Miroku's reaction afterward--hitting him on the head. =P Exactly how I would have envisioned the scene myself.) The grammar was fine considering English isn't your first language. There were some mistakes, but nothing too big. Besides for some of the quotation marks being a bit messed up, the only thing that really caught my notice was the line "If I'm alright?!" near the very beginning... it seemed like it should have been "Am I alright?!" instead, though I might have misinterpreted that. Anyway, very nice work. I think it'll be going on my favorites. ^_^
DR 2003-10-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI loved this story. Very powerfull and well writen. I hope you write more in the fucher!
shattered 2003-10-23 ch 1,	abuseHey! This is a really good stoy, and you managed to keep the characters in character. Nice. ~love, shattered PS: I didn't know English wasn't your first language intil you said so and I never would have thought that it wasn't.
Del_kaidin 2003-10-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery good. You did well for English not being your first language. Minor spelling errors and tense things... but nothing that distracted the reader from the story.
ShiniSanoYasha 2003-10-23 ch 1,	abuseWow! Your spelling and grammar were much better than many of the people I find writing fanfics in English. Sometimes it's scary how they can mangle proper English. My only clue was the quotes; sometimes your first quotation mark was at the bottom of the line like a double comma (mostly toward the begining). Great story! well written, good emotion. Miroku isn't always a perverted **; sometimes (albeit rarely) he does act like a decent, caring human being. I loved the bit where Miroku thonked Inuyasha on the head. That was totally something that would happen. Ja!

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