Pretty good. Fighting for oneself is often much harder than fighting for others. You laid it all out and tied it together quite nicely... Great job..

Good story! Great idea! It was good to see Lara again! I like her.

Great story.

A great story! The seven are all very good in-character, and the plot is interesting.

I like the part where Vin is "blackmailing" Chris to stay alive.

Good story. You did a really nice job.

Interesting how you used the Jon Bon Jovi song

"Miracle" within the story as a way of showing

how much Vin truly cares about Chris.

Looking forward to reading any of your future stories.