that is so sweet and it would totally go with any of their deaths, cuz there all so young (even though im about 2 mos younger than chiriko ^o^)

:( So sad... This is a really good poem. ^__^

*smile* SO GOD!

Hey that was pretty good, keep up the good work! (I miss Chiriko...)
-LS

WHA p-poor chiriko!
oh right.really good really sad

nice, very touching.

Very powerful. You have talent.

POWERFUL!

wow, nice poem... sad but nice. please continue.

Well done. For most poems I'll just read it line by line, but your every line just jumps up grabbing my attention, so I actually had to read and re-read the entire poem a few times to fully understand it. It's touches me. Do continue!

My favourite line:
For this life cut short