 update 2006-08-10 . chapter 17 update |
 cherry fantasy 2005-11-27 . chapter 17Oh cool this fic is great ! I love it ! ^-^
You had a great idea for the story, it's very interesting and very well written ! What a great fic !
Max: Are you saying you enjoy seeing us suffer ?
Me: Well... you have to be harsh sometimes if you want to make an interesting plot.
Ray: You're so mean ! (hugs Max protectively)
Me: I am not !
Tyson: Yes you are so stop lying.
Me: Oh shut up you !
Kai: (glares) Don't talk like that to my Ty-koi! (grabs an axe and starts chasing Cherry-chan with it)
Me: 00 Eep!! (tries to escape Kai)
Max,Ray and Tyson: Oh my... -.-;;
Hum... well... anyway, great fic ! ^-^ Update soon ! |
| kuramanhiei 2005-10-18 . chapter 17 Please add more of this soon I want to know if Max and Tyson go with the so called Gods or if they stay with Kai and Rei. |
| KiraraCutie 2005-09-05 . chapter 17 this story is awsome! update soon must see what happens |
| LaDiNi 2005-07-30 . chapter 17 ok... you took a real long time... but well, I guess you do have a good reason. I moved away myself, it's not so bad as long as you keep contacting your friends anyway you can ;)!
well, I have to say I wasn't expeting this.. poor maxie, I guess he's a little more sensitive then Kai.. Please update! |
| Kaay-chan 2005-07-12 . chapter 17 Yayers!
Jay: What are you -on-, girl?
Kay: well...lets see her...I part of a blueberry muffin for breakfast, had some fryes and a chocolate chip cookie for lunch, and I at a fugesickle a few hours ago.
Jay: Oh...AH
Kay: -.- *Thwack*
Jay: x.x
Kay: that's better. now, this was really good but you -really--really--really- need to update more often. But like i like to say, it's better to be an author who updates slowly than one who writes a fic, works on it for a while, and then falls off the face of the earth, never to be heard from again. Anywho, great story. Keep up the good work and update soon! |
| artemis347 2005-07-05 . chapter 17 HOT! Tala is HOT! i love your fic! wicked story! so...i still would llike 3 or 6 -somes...that ould be amusing...and v. sexy...sry...weird and screwed up thought...damn this brain..hn... update soon! is rei aaobut to undergo the same treatment from enrique? |
| Fifi McFu 2005-07-04 . chapter 17 oh, grooviness. update soon, i likey a lotty |
| Chibi McFu 2005-06-29 . chapter 17 BA! no, tala, restrain yourself! (tala lunges out, still trying to KILL)...ahem...ok tala, go home. Anyways, this story is cool, i love max! |
| Noom-Moonlight Wolf 2005-06-21 . chapter 17 your alive i don't belive it so many stories that i like that haven't been updated i thought you were dead(or kicked off of fanfiction) i be really happy that you finally updated. well update other stories(as well as this one)soon please. see ya.
Noom-Moonlight Wolf |
| Droopy1389 2005-06-18 . chapter 17 *is sorry for the late review* OO NO DONT KILL KAI! *tackles Tala* XD Nothing like two hott bishies huh? *giggles* ;_; how sad..too much anger build up in all of them ^^ Update soon..need to see what happens! |
| Mediscout 2005-06-18 . chapter 17 Mimi: Maxie,no! |
| Mediscout 2005-06-18 . chapter 16 Max: Um, Mimi's busy beating up Enrigue and Tala...-hear chairs crashing and mimi yelling- Er, um...-hear howling and Mimi laughing- Ok...-Mimi walks in and smiles at Max-
Mimi: Sorry I'm late^^ |
| Mediscout 2005-06-18 . chapter 15 Mimi: Go Ray^^ |
| Mediscout 2005-06-18 . chapter 14 Mimi: Your friend sounds like a great person^^ |
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