|Reviews for Four Swords Times Two|
| Guest 11/29/11 . chapter 30
The ending sucked. It was so cheesy.
| Guest 10/16/11 . chapter 30
It was ok, but there was many spelling errors.
| Empty Account Please Delete 12/17/04 . chapter 30
That was great. I spent almost all day reading 3/4 of it. I am now going to read three!
| dimentional wanderer 10/15/04 . chapter 5
...I have to quote Garabaldi from the show Babylon 5. "Thin air? Why is it always thin air? Never fat air, chubby air, mostly-fit-could-stand-to-lose-a-few-pounds air?"
| Xigo 6/5/04 . chapter 30
Hiya bud! I noticed a coupel weeks ago that this was up, and I'm like- "Holy cow! A sequel to the Four Swords! Awesome!" So, I read the entire thing, and now I'm finished! And here my friend, is a very long, but useful review...
I was very excited for this fic, and while it was good, I was very dissappointed. It was not what I thought it was gonna be. Lemme start out with the good first-
Storyline- Very good. Better than last time, original and rather cool in a way.
Adventures- The quests they had were very nice as always. I can tell ya, they were easily as good as last time, if not better. You really scored well here.
Main Enemies- Awesome, best thing of the fic. Never have I seen anything like this. To create such an original team of vile villains was nothing I've ever seen before, all with different personalities. Props dude.
Yusuke and Mewtwo- This was sweet. Yusuke's an amazing anime character, and you really did a fine job on him. He acted as he would in the show, and his powers were written rather well. Mewtwo I was very happy to see. He's another really cool character, with an amazing personality and great attacks, though sadly I felt the personality you gave himw as awful. I'll explain in the bad next.
Bad *yes, sadly bud that's all I can give ya for good stuff*
Robotnik, Rogue and the technology- Very original to put in a Zelda fic, but I thought it was horrible. It didn't seem Zeldaish then, and Sonic characters are not epic enought of it in a Zelda fic. The mechanical fights just weren't cool for a Zelda story, and Rogue is way too cartoony to fit in one.
Spelling- Please bud, you're 14, and I saw several spelling mistakes, on Zelda-themed words and simple words you should never spell wrong at that age. I make a bunch of spelling errors too, but I either fix them or they're only like once a chapter. I don't know what's up with that, but it was sad to see that coming from a 14 year old. In the future, either use spell check on Microsoft Word or a dictionary.
Swearing- This was another bad thing. For God's sake you overdid it. You ruined Zelda's sweet, gentle personality by what you made her say, you ruined Link's heroic, moral personality by making him say whatever, and with Mewtwo and his personality was horrific. I highly doubt that guy would ever say something like that, and when you made Kenshin swear it was beyond awful. You really trashed the characters when you turned them in swearing machines. You may think it's cool, but your dialogue then was immature and stupid.
Writing- Bad. I'm sorry, but it stunk. Your "paragraphs" no I'm sorry, lines had no description at all, half the time it was just summing up what was happening or plainly telling of it. Your chapters were very short, and you gave the vaguest descriptions of the characters *especially the final spawn, I had barely any clue was it was!*
Battles- I tell ya, the only good ones were with the Garos and Rando. Nearly everything else was either boring, un-descriptive, or just terrible. Your final battles overall were like a 2 on a scale of one 1 to 10. Here's an overlook on them-
Kenshin vs. Kagato- Good, the best.
Yusuke vs. Shenshut- Slightly good, the second best.
Mewtwo vs. Lena- Meh.
Robotnik vs. Gomba- Meh.
Zelda vs. Tea- Bad.
Inuyasha vs. Jonachi- Awful
Zidane vs. Shulla- Terrible.
Link vs. Shenron- Horrible *nothing happened!*
Everyone vs. Final Spawn- God-awful. The worst final battle I've ever seen in me entire life and a pathetic battle overall. The spawn just got his butt kicked half the time, all he did was one stinkin' beam blast, and the rest of the time the team was battering him in writing was was undescreptive and plain.
Ending- I don't know what's worse- this or the final battle. Holy God this thing was God-awful. You rushed it, it was boring, it wasn't epic, it wasn't descriptive, and it just plain stunk.
I'm sorry that I had to say this, but I did. Constructive criticism. You did less than a mediocre job on this fic that had amazing potential. I hope Four Swords Times Three have improvements in everything I stated as bad, and that you take this advice.
| James17 4/27/04 . chapter 2
This is a really good chapter. It sets the characters in their positions in the story. Keep up the good work!
| Tsuiraku Tanrei 3/28/04 . chapter 30
Yay! Zidane is becoming a soccer ball! ANYway, that was a really good ficcy! Can't wait for the next one!
| Winged Knight 3/27/04 . chapter 30
Superb ending. It was worthy of your story. I salute you RichaCo. Keep writing the good ones!
| Story Weaver1 3/15/04 . chapter 29
I can't wait for the final battle. I Know It's gonna be awesome! For more warriors you could Squall or Cloud from Final Fantasy.
| Winged Knight 3/14/04 . chapter 29
The climax is coming! I wonder if Link still has the Fierce Diety's Mask?(Yes, I know I have asked this before) I sense that big explosions and lots of property damage are coming in the next chapter. Keep writing the good ones!
| Tsuiraku Tanrei 3/14/04 . chapter 29
Maan, seriously! Every time I press the refresh button, there's a new chapter. Anyway, can't wait for the next one!
| Tsuiraku Tanrei 3/14/04 . chapter 28
Okay. Three chapters. After reading the last chapter, I wrote a review - only to find there was another chapter up. Hmm, you're really at this today, aren't you?
| Tsuiraku Tanrei 3/14/04 . chapter 27
Wow, you updated a lot today! Cool! Can't wait to see the next chapter, even though it is PG13... hmm, it's probably Zidane's fight, isn't it?
| Nintendofan 3/14/04 . chapter 29
This must be a world record, you updated 4 times so far, and you claim to update again. I can't wait for the final battle. If you are still looking for characters for 4 swords times 3, then you could consider Alex or Jess from Lunar.
| Winged Knight 3/14/04 . chapter 28
Sexual jokes galor! That was really funny. This just keeps getting better and better. Keep writing he good ones!