This was so hilarious! Best fanfic I've read in awhile. My ONLY problem with it was that I generally don't like fanfics w/any made-up charas, but it was only one chara & it's not a big deal. I like any fanfic that has Michelo in it, though (LOL). Awesome work!

(Thanks for reviewing my stuff! I'm not too fond of Wong either, but I think he's the only reason most people read my fanfic. Seriously... and yes, Urube/Kyoji RULES! Kyahaha!)
Anyway, this story has me cracking up. ... Poor Urube. XD

Update damnit! Later.
Shuffle Queen

I had exactly one problem with this chapter...I love the OOCness, Domon's dense...ness, the DoD, Chibodee's self-confidence, and blah blah blah...but it was TOO SHORT! I need, I CRAVE longer chapters! Don't do this to me! Update pronto. Later.
Shuffle Queen

This is so much fun to read. Chinodee can be hysterical.

HAHAHAHAHA i love this fic it's so funny. i can't wait till the next chapter so make it soon or you shall pay...hehe *

o this is so funny i like i like.. * me wana hear more *...i cant wait till the next chapter *.. hehehehehehehehehehehehehe...ok well you better finish the next chapter soon.. hehe well thats all
P.S. I love Sai Saici and Juri loves Hiei

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...! That was hilarious. I literally exploded when I waas reading that...my brother actually thought I was choking (stupid kid still can't do the Heimlich...almost made me throw up...) Moving on! So are there really four of you or just one psychotic personalitiy with imaginary friends? Heh, I talk way to much _ Update soon and keep it up. (And it IS a wonderful adevnture...so much action and true courage...) Later.
Shuffle Queen

Extremely hysterical! *is losing oxygen from the lack of breathing while laughing* I can't wait 'till the next chapter and I can't wait even more 'till episode 13(because I'm obsessed with it!)

I didn't even realize that you were going to write an additional chapter. This was really good; the humor flowed naturally and the charcters were not at all OOC *except maybe Domon at some points...then again, he always seemed a bit dense* ;)
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Hope to see another installment of the wonderful adventure posted soon. Later.
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Shuffle Queen

LOL. I couldn't stop laughing the whole time.

Ha ha ha, this is funny! Write more!

Shuffle Queen

Yay! Ulube got hurt! Death to Ulube!(As you can see I hate Ulube)