Woah... That was intense! Great writing!

oh my.

I must admit at first i was hesitant to read this fic, after searching so long on to find a good fic ...things get a lil frustrating

But wow. I'm impressed, I love your perception.I never actually thought of this sort of relationship for them to have - and it is absolutely perfect.Just what i'v been searching for, lol.

I just love the way yugi confuses his soul room with the real world - man, I wish I thought of that too. just a superb fic; a great balance of the characters' personalities, your descriptive writing,the plot - oh my, I just love it.keep it up =)

Now that was a good and to the point angst fest!

Absolutely haunting, chilling and bueatiful. Well done!

Holy high hell!! This was creepy, insane, crazy, eerything meaning scary. But it was awesome. Oerall, awesome. Nice job.

Loves the Twilight Zone feel to the end of this. Almost makes _me_ want to scream with frustration for poor Yugi, since he seems to be unable to focus on it. I know he'd probably want to. Gorgeous story. I love your Yugioh writing style. I'd love to see how you would take on the Kaiba brothers:)

I've always been a fan of your writing, and found your gift for expressing emotions through words amazing. The subjects, premises, and ideas your write of are always so well developed. Then again, this one, I felt, lacked a little. Don't get me wrong; I adored this fic. The overwhelming cloud of angst that settles in the last chapter left me purring. It was dark and sinister in a way that was entirely unique to the duality between Yami no Yuugi and Yuugi, while still being believable. It was, however, the progression from the sense of love in the first chapter to the crushing hate in the last that I felt wasn’t explored as well as I think I’ve seen in your other writing.

Perhaps it was the emotions themselves that were hard to express. Words like “love” and “hate” are not entirely suitable to describe the type of relationship that Yami no Yuugi and Yuugi have. They almost seem paltry in comparison. Yet, your ability to portray Yami no Yuugi’s devotion in “I Want the Mad Ones” leads me to wonder.

Perhaps, instead, it’s because I’m up entirely too late to be reading something of this magnitude. A more likely reason.

Then again, I think it was the tone of the last chapter that felt different. Like a subtle change in perception, from a series of recollections to a narrative in the moment.

Despite my own wavering on what felt off in this fic, I still adored it. There is much to be said for your writing that cannot be described this late at night and by someone with a lacking vocabulary. Suffice it to say, your writing is awe-inspiring as usual.

This is such a good story, why did you stop?

Well written, but chilling, a facinating twist on characterisation. Believable, dark, captivating, I could describe the emotions this brings out in me for hours. Excellent writing, truly excellent. I only wish this review was more detailed and useful.

nicely done hon, but one thing: i think you take this who tradgic drama thing way too far. i'm not just talking about your writting, i mean you in general, the way you summerize yourself. it gets old after a while. i actually feel the dark cloud covering you when you write. i know that you've had some tradgidies in your life and i sympathize with you, really, i do, but to be constantly depressed ... it gets to be old news. i seriously think some drugs (perscription, of course) would help. i've had a lot of tradgidies too and i take them. that's how i come up w/ those joyfull baby stories ... to keep myself happy. so just think about that for a while.

Hmm, this chapter is very different from the rest--it feels like we've shifted somehow to real time action, instead of just Yugi's recollections and muses. Did you make that style switch on purpose? Like, is this going to be the end of the fic? The change in style makes this chapter seem more like a finale than a continuation--just something to keep in mind if you're going to continue this fic. I REALLY would like to see more of this, it's such an interesting take on the relationship between Yugi and Yami.

A question--why does it hurt Yugi when Yami takes control? Was this always the case from the beginning of their time together, or did it only begin hurting Yugi when Yami became possessive?

Another question--if you continue the story, are we going to hear about Yugi's friends at all? Or is this purely a Yugi/Yami fic?

As always, fantastic job. I look forward to seeing more work from you.

Hey, you decided to continue with this! I'm glad. I thought that it would end with the last chapter, but you've proved me wrong. Are you going to write more or end it here? Or is this the one that you only update once a year for the anniversary? It COULD end here, but I'd love to hear more. Nicely done. I got goosebumps.
~N

Wow...that was good... Plz continue?

And here I thought things couldn't gett spookier after the last chapter. This one - is both scary and hell and so very 'right'. I can see this happening between them, the line blurring until no one can tell one from the other.

This has been an intriguing read. I am curious to know if there will ever be an update to it... or is it over?